Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรตรงประเด็นและชัดเจนมากขึ้น ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงเกี่ยวกับการปลูกต้นไม้ที่บ้าน และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดถึงสิ่งที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง เช่น ปากกา นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: No, I don't keep plants at home myself, but my grandparents do because they have a lot of free time to take care of them.

提案: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลมากขึ้น ควรอธิบายลักษณะของดอกไม้และเหตุผลที่ไม่ปลูกอีกต่อไปอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: When I was young, I grew jasmine flowers which are white and have a pleasant fragrance. They were easy to grow, but I don't have them now because I lack time to take care of them.

提案: ควรตอบคำถามอย่างชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลและเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: I know a little about growing plants because I learned some tips from my parents and grandparents, but I haven't practiced it much myself.

提案: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างที่ดี หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือผิดพลาด ควรใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่ออธิบายวัฒนธรรมการให้ของขวัญอย่างชัดเจน

例: I don't think Chinese people usually send plants as gifts. Instead, they often give items like food, snacks, or flowers.

× I keep pens at home but it was my grandparents who did it.

✓ I keep plants at home but it was my grandparents who did it.

The word 'pens' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'plants' to match the question about keeping plants. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense issue, but since the sentence uses past tense 'was' correctly, no tense correction is needed.

× Because they already at home and have a lot of free time so.

✓ Because they were already at home and had a lot of free time.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Because' clauses should not end with 'so'. Also, 'already at home' needs the verb 'were' to be grammatically correct in past tense. The phrase 'have a lot of free time' should be in past tense 'had' to match the time frame.

× They already take care of it.

✓ They already took care of it.

The verb 'take' should be in the past tense 'took' to match the past time frame indicated by 'already' and the previous sentence.

× I I would go up and when I was a kid is our Jasmine flower is white and blue smell good.

✓ When I was a kid, we had jasmine flowers that were white and blue and smelled good.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Would go up' is unclear and unnecessary. The subject and verb agreement need correction, and the description of the flowers should be connected properly.

× It's not that hard to grow, but now it's gone because I don't have enough time to take care of it.

✓ It wasn't that hard to grow, but now it's gone because I don't have enough time to take care of it.

Since the speaker is referring to the past when they grew the plant, 'is' should be changed to past tense 'was' to maintain consistency.

× I do but I think it's not that much.

✓ I do, but I don't know that much.

The phrase 'it's not that much' is incorrect here. The speaker likely means they don't know much about growing plants. The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used; 'I don't know that much' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Some I learned from my parents or grandparents but it not my way so.

✓ I learned some from my parents or grandparents, but it's not my way.

The sentence is awkward and missing auxiliary verbs. 'Some I learned' should be 'I learned some'. 'It not my way' should be 'it's not my way'. The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary.

× I don't really know everything about it.

✓ I don't really know everything about it.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I don't think so. Addition is people lighters and food or snack as a gift Morgan pen or flowers.

✓ I don't think so. In addition, people give lighters and food or snacks as gifts, or sometimes pens or flowers.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'Addition is' should be 'In addition,'; 'people lighters' is missing the verb 'give'; 'snack' should be plural 'snacks'; 'Morgan pen' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo, corrected to 'pens'; sentence structure is corrected for clarity.