Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobni qisqaroq va aniq ayting; grammatika va so‘z tanlovini to‘g‘rilang. Masalan, mavzuni bir gapda aniqlang: qaysi fan qiyinligini ayting, keyin sabab(lar)ni 1–2 ta qo‘llab-quvvatlovchi gaplarda bering. Misol uchun: “Russian is the most challenging subject for me because I am not fluent and the lessons are fast.” So‘zlarni to‘g‘ri talaffuz va shaklda ishlating (masalan, “Russian” o‘rniga “Russia” noto‘g‘ri), hamda o‘qituvchi xarakterini tavsiflashda aniq so‘zlardan foydalaning (kind, strict, helpful).

例: The most challenging subject for me is Russian because I am not fluent and I find the grammar difficult. For example, I struggle with verb forms and vocabulary, and the lessons move quickly, which makes it hard to follow.

提案: Javobni tabiiy va qisqa qiling: bevosita javob (Yes/No) va 1–2 sabab. Grammatikani tekshiring: “I allowed to” noto‘g‘ri — “I like to challenge myself” yoki “I allow myself to be challenged” kabi ifadalarni ishlating. Keraksiz so‘zlar va takrorlardan qoching (“this time”, “for myself” keraksiz).

例: Yes, I like to challenge myself because it helps me improve my skills and gain confidence. For instance, I often set difficult study goals that push me to learn faster and enjoy the progress.

提案: Savolga aniqroq javob bering (Yes/No) va sabablarni aniq, mantiqan bog‘lab bering. Ingliz tilida umumlashmalardan qoching (“you people”) va shaxsiy fikrni “I” bilan ifoda eting. Qayta tuzilish: birinchi gap — fikringiz, keyin 1–2 aniq sabab va misol. So‘zlarni to‘g‘ri shaklda ishlating (patient people → more patient).

例: Yes, I do, because facing challenges helps me grow both personally and professionally. For example, dealing with difficult projects at work taught me patience and improved my problem-solving skills.

提案: Javobni tuzatib, aniq va tabiiy gap tuzing: boshlang‘ich gapda yondashuvingizni ayting (I usually ...), keyin 1–2 usul va misol bilan qo‘llab-quvvatlang. Grammatikani tuzating (“find a solve” → “find a solution” yoki “try to solve them”), va “special day this time” kabi noaniq iboralarni aniqlang.

例: I usually try to organize my tasks and prioritize them when I am busy. If I can't finish everything, I ask friends for help, otherwise I focus on one task at a time and complete the most important ones first.

× When I when I study at school, I find the Russia, it's a very challenging for me because I didn't speak in Russia and I didn't like it because our teacher is not kind and she's very hearty.

✓ When I study at school, I find Russian very challenging for me because I don't speak Russian, and I don't like it because our teacher is not kind and she is very harsh.

This sentence has multiple structure and grammar issues: redundancy ('When I when I'), wrong noun/adjective forms ('the Russia' should be 'Russian' as the language), tense inconsistency (mix of past 'didn't speak' and general statement — use present 'don't speak'), wrong adjective choice ('hearty' is incorrect; 'harsh' or 'strict' fits), and punctuation/splicing (comma splices). Suggestion: remove repetition, choose correct word forms for languages and descriptions, keep tense consistent for habitual statements, and split clauses with appropriate conjunctions or punctuation.

× Absolutely yes. I allowed to challenge myself when because it's a give me a good chance to improve my skills and this time I can enjoy for myself. It's also extremely nice for me.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I allow myself to be challenged because it gives me a good chance to improve my skills, and I can enjoy it. It's also extremely nice for me.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'allowed' (should be present 'allow' for habitual ability), wrong structure 'allow myself to be challenged' or 'allow myself to challenge myself', misuse of 'when' and 'this time', and incorrect phrase 'it's a give me' — correct is 'it gives me'. Suggestion: use correct modal/verb forms for permission/ability, maintain consistent tense, and use natural phrases like 'allow myself' and 'it gives me'.

× Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?

✓ Do you like living a life that has a lot of challenges?

This is more of a stylistic correction: 'Do you like living' is more natural than 'Do you like to live' in this context. Both can be grammatical, but 'like living' better expresses an ongoing preference. Suggestion: prefer gerund after 'like' when speaking about general preferences.

× I didn't think about this before, but in my opinion, it's very good for you people because this time you can improve your behavior and you can improve your career.

✓ I hadn't thought about this before, but in my opinion, it's very good for people because you can improve your behavior and your career.

Use past perfect 'hadn't thought' to indicate a prior state before now. 'You people' is unnatural; use 'people' or 'you'. 'This time' is awkward here — remove it. Keep present modal 'can' for general ability. Suggestion: use past perfect for prior thoughts, choose natural pronouns, and avoid unnecessary temporal phrases.

× It's very useful for you when you have any kind of challenging.

✓ It's very useful for you when you face any kind of challenge.

Incorrect form 'challenging' used as a noun; use 'challenge'. 'Any kind of' is acceptable but must be followed by a noun. Suggestion: use 'challenge' as the noun and 'face' as the verb for encountering difficulties.

× You will be very patient people in the future.

✓ You will be very patient people in the future.

Grammatically acceptable but slightly awkward: better 'You will become very patient' or 'You will be very patient people in the future.' No change required for agreement; optional improvement suggested to use 'become' for change over time.

× If I have a busy day or the special day this time I try to find a solve to do all of them and most of the time I ask help from my friends and they also help me.

✓ If I have a busy day or a special day, I try to find a solution to do them all, and most of the time I ask my friends for help and they help me.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'special day', incorrect noun 'solve' should be 'solution', word order 'do them all' is natural, and 'ask help from my friends' should be 'ask my friends for help'. Also add commas. Suggestion: use correct noun forms, proper articles, and the phrase 'ask someone for help'.

× If I don't have enough friends, I just do all of them myself.

✓ If I don't have enough friends, I just do everything myself.

'Do all of them' is awkward because 'them' refers to tasks/events; 'everything' or 'all the tasks' is better. Keep present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'do everything myself' or 'do all the tasks myself' for clarity.