Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence, correct small grammar errors and be more concise. Use linking words to add one clear supporting detail (purpose or example). Avoid redundant phrases and keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: I often visit AI tool websites such as ChatGPT and Gemini. I use them to organize my ideas and help with daily tasks, for example preparing presentations or drafting essays. They save me time and make my work more structured.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence that names the site, fix grammar (subject-verb agreement), and provide one specific reason with a concrete example. Use a linking phrase to connect reasons.

例: My favourite website is a domestic video platform called Billy Billy. I like it because it offers a wide range of content; for example, there are many practical tutorial courses on topics like cooking and coding.

提案: Begin with a direct statement about the change, ensure correct noun forms and use a linking word to show result. Provide a specific benefit and keep sentences natural and concise.

例: Yes. Recently, Bidi Bidi added an AI-powered feature that lets users ask questions about the video they are watching. As a result, I can ask the AI to summarize the main points, which saves time and makes learning more efficient.

提案: Start with a concise topic sentence and correct minor phrasing issues. Use linking words to connect cause and effect, and give one concrete example of popular content or user behaviour.

例: I think online video websites are very popular in my country because people are busy with work and study. Consequently, many people watch short clips or vlogs after a long day to relax and unwind.

提案: Answer directly, fix small grammar and preposition errors, and use a linking word to contrast websites and books. Provide a clear, specific reason and a concise example.

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are time-saving and convenient. For example, I can quickly search for a topic and get immediate answers, whereas finding the same information in a book can take much longer.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, keep grammar natural, and add one specific detail about the website’s purpose or audience. Use a linking word to show the intended result.

例: Yes, I'd love to have my own website because it would let me share ideas and express opinions. For example, I could publish blog posts and photos to attract people with similar interests and start discussions.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, prepositions), and be specific about what you learned. Use linking words to connect the method (how you use the site) with the outcome (benefit).

例: I've learned many study skills from educational websites. For example, when I ask AI tutors to help organize my ideas, they suggest different perspectives and examples, which broadens my understanding and improves my essays.

× And I often visit AI tools websites like ChatGPT or Gemini because I need them to help me organize my ideas or handle my daily tasks like present a presentation or finish the essay.

✓ And I often visit AI tools websites like ChatGPT or Gemini because I need them to help me organize my ideas or handle my daily tasks like presenting a presentation or finishing an essay.

The verbs following 'like' and after 'handle my daily tasks' should be in the -ing form (gerund) to indicate activities: 'present' -> 'presenting' and 'finish' -> 'finishing'. Use gerunds after verbs like 'like' and after expressions indicating tasks or activities.

× My favorite app site is a domestic online video website called Billy Billy. People in my country loves this website because you can find multiple resources on that website.

✓ My favorite app site is a domestic online video website called Billy Billy. People in my country love this website because you can find many resources on it.

Subject-verb agreement: 'People' is plural so use 'love' not 'loves'. Also avoid repeating 'website'; use the pronoun 'it'. Use 'many' rather than 'multiple' for native phrasing with countable 'resources'.

× For example, you can find helpful tutorial courses on that.

✓ For example, you can find helpful tutorial courses there.

Use the correct adverb 'there' to refer to a place, not 'that'. 'That' is a demonstrative determiner or pronoun and is ungrammatical here.

× Yes, recently Bidi Bidi added an AI powered tour features that lets you ask questions about the video you are watching.

✓ Yes, recently Bidi Bidi added an AI-powered tour feature that lets you ask questions about the video you are watching.

Mismatch between singular and plural: 'features' (plural) conflicts with 'a' and with 'lets' which is singular. Use singular 'feature' to match 'a' and 'lets'. Also hyphenate 'AI-powered' as a compound adjective.

× For example, I can ask the AI to summarize the main point of the video, which really saves time and makes learning much more efficient.

✓ For example, I can ask the AI to summarize the main points of the video, which really saves time and makes learning much more efficient.

'Main point' can be pluralized to 'main points' since videos often have multiple points; this is a style/clarity choice rather than strict grammar, but keeps meaning consistent. No gerund error here; change improves naturalness.

× From my point of view, I think online video websites are very popular in my country because nowadays people are so occupied their work and study.

✓ From my point of view, I think online video websites are very popular in my country because nowadays people are so occupied with their work and studies.

The adjective 'occupied' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate what occupies someone. Also use plural 'studies' and possessive 'their work' remains but pair with 'with'.

× After a long and exhausting day, people would like to open the online video websites to watch some video and help them relax and unwind.

✓ After a long and exhausting day, people would like to open online video websites to watch videos and help themselves relax and unwind.

'Some video' is incorrect: use plural 'videos'. Reflexive pronoun 'themselves' is needed after 'help' when the subject benefits. Also drop 'the' before 'online video websites' for general reference.

× For me, I would like to get information on website because it's time saving and convenient.

✓ For me, I would like to get information on websites because it's time-saving and convenient.

Use plural 'websites' or 'a website' with article. Also 'time-saving' is usually hyphenated as a compound adjective. 'On websites' is natural for general use.

× For example, I could directly search what I want on the website and it could give me answers at the moment.

✓ For example, I could directly search for what I want on the website and it could give me answers immediately.

Use the phrasal verb 'search for' (not 'search what'). 'At the moment' is awkward here; 'immediately' or 'right away' is more natural.

× But if I'm reading the book it might take me a long time to search the information I needed.

✓ But if I'm reading a book it might take me a long time to find the information I need.

Tense and article corrections: use 'a book' for general reference. Use present tense 'I need' to match the conditional 'if I'm reading' (present). Use 'find' rather than 'search' plus object.

× Of course, I'd love to have my own website because it would be interesting to share my ideas and express my opinions.

✓ Of course, I'd love to have my own website because it would be interesting to share my ideas and express my opinions.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change necessary. 'Would' expresses hypothetical desire appropriately.

× For example, I could publish blog posts or photos on my website, which could attract people who have similar interests.

✓ For example, I could publish blog posts or photos on my website, which could attract people who have similar interests.

This sentence is correct as written. The participle 'attract' is correctly used in the relative clause 'which could attract...'.

× I think I learned a lot from the website that helps with my study.

✓ I think I have learned a lot from websites that help with my studies.

Use present perfect 'have learned' to indicate experience up to now. Use plural 'websites' for generality and 'studies' plural. 'That helps' should be 'that help' to agree with plural 'websites'.

× For example, when I'm communicating with AI tours, asking it to help me organize my idea, it could offer me with various kind of ideas and that really broaden my horizon.

✓ For example, when I'm communicating with AI tools, asking it to help me organize my ideas, it can offer me various kinds of ideas and that really broadens my horizons.

Multiple issues: 'AI tours' should be 'AI tools'. Use plural 'ideas'. 'Offer me with' is incorrect; use 'offer me' (no 'with'). 'Various kind of' should be 'various kinds of' or 'various kinds of ideas'. Subject-verb agreement: 'that really broadens my horizons' (broaden -> broadens) and use plural 'horizons'.