Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more concise: start with a direct topic sentence naming the types of sites, then give one specific example with a brief reason. Reduce hesitations and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “new daily Tuesday update currently event”). Use linking words like “for example” and “because” correctly.

例: I usually visit news websites and online learning platforms. For example, I read articles on a daily news site because they give me different perspectives, and I use an online learning platform to improve my English.

提案: Be grammatically accurate and specific: use correct verb forms (provides), countable/uncountable nouns (“many articles”), and state one or two clear reasons. Keep answers within 2–3 sentences and avoid vague endings like “and less.”

例: My favourite website is bbclearning.com because it provides many articles and interactive English classes. I use it to practise reading and to complete short listening exercises.

提案: Avoid pronunciation/wording errors and be specific about the change: state when it happened and describe what exactly changed and why it matters. Use linking words like “last month” and “as a result.” Remove filler words and finish sentences clearly.

例: Yes. Last month the main website I use updated its layout and navigation to improve the user experience. As a result, pages load faster and it is easier to find articles.

提案: Organise your answer: give a clear topic sentence naming 2–3 popular types, then briefly explain each with one specific reason. Correct grammar (are popular, social platforms) and avoid trailing off mid-sentence.

例: Social media platforms are very popular in Thailand because they make communication easy. News websites and e-commerce sites are also common, since people use them to stay informed and to shop online.

提案: Good structure and balance. Improve accuracy and fluency: plural/singular agreement (websites, sources, articles) and tighten phrases (e.g., “for in-depth reference”). Add a linking phrase to compare clearly.

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are fast, up to date and offer many sources such as articles and videos. However, I still use books for in-depth reference and reliable background information.

提案: Clarify and be specific about purpose and content: correct confusing phrases (“old website” vs “own website”), use singular/plural correctly, and give one clear example of what you would publish. Avoid extra words and finish sentences clearly.

例: Yes, I would like to have my own website to showcase my professional work and reach a wider audience. For example, I could publish teaching materials and student success stories.

提案: Be specific about skills and give a clear example: correct grammar (educational websites, skills, time management) and name a program or tool if possible. Use linking words to show result. Avoid trailing off and finish with a clear outcome.

例: Educational websites have taught me useful skills, not only academic knowledge but also time management. For example, I learned to use a scheduling app that helped me plan my study time and improve my productivity.

× I often visit new website and online learning platform.

✓ I often visit new websites and online learning platforms.

The nouns 'website' and 'platform' refer to general categories and should be plural when speaking about visiting more than one. Use plural forms to match the meaning of repeated or multiple items. Suggestion: Use 'websites' and 'online learning platforms' when you mean more than one.

× For example, I often uh, go to the new daily Tuesday update currently event and read article that give me different perspective and I also enjoy learning.

✓ For example, I often go to the daily Tuesday update and read articles that give me different perspectives, and I also enjoy learning.

Several issues: 'daily Tuesday update currently event' is unclear and redundant; clarify to 'daily Tuesday update'. 'article' must be plural 'articles' to match 'read'. 'give' should be 'give' (correct) but needs plural 'perspectives'. Ensure parallel structure with commas and conjunctions. Suggestion: Keep phrases clear, use plural nouns for repeated items, and maintain parallel structure.

× Well actually my favorite website is bbclearning.com because it provide a range of articles and interactive English class that can provide me a lot of article to practice English skill by reading and less.

✓ Well, actually my favorite website is bbclearning.com because it provides a range of articles and interactive English classes that give me many articles to practice English skills by reading and listening.

The verb must agree with third-person singular subject: 'provide' -> 'provides'. 'class' should be plural 'classes' if referring to multiple interactive classes. Use 'give' to match plural 'classes' or 'that provide'. 'a lot of article' -> 'many articles'. 'skill' -> 'skills'. 'less' likely intended 'listening'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct plural nouns; choose correct vocabulary ('listening').

× Yes, I offend. Notice the website I visit uh last month they update their layout and navigation to improve user experience.

✓ Yes, I often noticed the website I visit; last month they updated their layout and navigation to improve the user experience.

'offend' is incorrect word; should be 'often' or 'I often notice'. Tense consistency: 'last month' requires past tense 'noticed' and 'updated'. Also add definite article 'the user experience'. Suggestion: Choose correct adverb ('often') and match tense to time expressions; include 'the' before 'user experience'.

× Moreover, I think they are just about front sight to bigger and uh.

✓ Moreover, I think they are just redesigning the front site to make it bigger and clearer.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'front sight' should be 'front site' or 'front page'. Pronoun 'they are just about' is odd; use a verb phrase like 'are redesigning'. Suggestion: Use clear verb phrases and correct nouns like 'front site' or 'front page' and complete the idea.

× Well, I think there are several websites that popular in Thailand.

✓ Well, I think there are several websites that are popular in Thailand.

Missing verb 'are' in the relative clause 'that are popular'. This is a sentence structure/verb omission causing singular/plural confusion. Suggestion: Include the verb 'are' after 'that' to form a correct relative clause.

× First, I would like to talk about social application or social platform that is recent have become commonly in Thailand.

✓ First, I would like to talk about social applications or social platforms that have recently become common in Thailand.

Incorrect word forms: 'application'/'platform' should be plural to match general reference. 'recent have become commonly' is incorrect order and form; use 'have recently become common'. Suggestion: Place adverb 'recently' before 'become' and use adjective 'common' rather than adverb 'commonly'.

× They provide a way to communicate with other and the second.

✓ They provide a way to communicate with others.

Use plural pronoun 'others' not 'other'. The phrase 'and the second' is incomplete and should be removed or completed with another idea. Suggestion: Use 'others' and finish the sentence with a second point if needed.

× I think I prefer getting information from website because they are fast, up to date and offer a wide range of source such as article or videos.

✓ I think I prefer getting information from websites because they are fast, up to date, and offer a wide range of sources such as articles or videos.

Use plural 'websites' and plural 'sources' and 'articles'. Also add commas for list clarity. Suggestion: Use plurals when referring to general categories and add commas in lists.

× However, I still use the book for in-depth, especially in reference or reliable background information that I need to use.

✓ However, I still use books for in-depth, especially for reference or reliable background information that I need.

'the book' -> 'books' for general use; preposition 'for' needed: 'for in-depth' -> 'for in-depth study' or 'for in-depth information'. 'in reference' -> 'for reference'. Redundant 'to use' removed. Suggestion: Use 'for reference' and plural 'books' when speaking generally; complete 'in-depth' with a noun like 'study' or 'information'.

× Yes, I would like to have my old website because it would allow me to showcase my professional work and reach a wider audience.

✓ Yes, I would like to have my own website because it would allow me to showcase my professional work and reach a wider audience.

'old website' is likely incorrect meaning; 'own website' fits the question. If 'old' intended, clarify. 'my own website' is idiomatic. Suggestion: Use 'my own website' to express ownership.

× For example, I could publish teaching material and student access story more I think owning our websites.

✓ For example, I could publish teaching materials and student success stories. I think owning a website would help.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'teaching material' should be plural 'teaching materials'; 'student access story' unclear—likely 'student success stories'. 'owning our websites' wrong pronoun and plurality; use 'owning a website'. Suggestion: Break into two clear sentences, use plural nouns and correct collocations ('success stories').

× I think educational website have taught me useful skill, not only focus on academic skill but also improve my management time.

✓ I think educational websites have taught me useful skills, not only focusing on academic skills but also improving my time management.

Use plural 'websites' and plural 'skills'. Use gerunds for parallel structure: 'focusing' and 'improving'. 'management time' should be 'time management'. Suggestion: Keep parallel gerund forms and correct collocations like 'time management'.

× Umm, for example, they often taught me about the program that helped my schedule to simpler and.

✓ For example, they often teach me about programs that help make my schedule simpler.

Tense consistency: 'often taught' (past) vs present habitual 'often teach'. Use plural 'programs'. 'helped my schedule to simpler' is ungrammatical; use 'help make my schedule simpler'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions, plural nouns for general items, and correct 'help + object + infinitive' structure.