Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 内容明确但表达不够连贯，句子有语法和词汇错误，最后举例混乱且无具体细节。建议：1) 开头直接给出主题句；2) 用1-2句用连接词（because, for example）给出具体原因和例子；3) 注意语法（如动词形式、代词）与发音清晰；4) 保持答案在3-5句内，例子要具体且完整。举例改进时可先想好要说的例子再说。

例: I often visit news and educational websites because I want to stay informed and keep learning. For example, I read national news sites every morning to follow current events, and I use educational platforms like Khan Academy to review concepts for my courses.

提案: 回答有主题句并给出原因，但有重复词（inter interesting）、搭配不当（recharge my batteries用法稍显口语化且不够正式），缺少具体细节。建议：1) 避免重复和口误；2) 用更恰当的词汇表达影响（e.g. improve my knowledge, inspire me）；3) 补充具体类型视频或频道名称。

例: My favourite website is Bilibili because it hosts many educational videos on topics like programming and history. For example, I often watch tutorial series that explain algorithms step by step, which helps me understand difficult concepts and stay motivated.

提案: 回答能触及主题但表达混乱，有语法错误和句子未完成，缺乏具体例子和连贯的逻辑。建议：1) 使用连接词（for example, moreover）组织观点；2) 注意主谓一致和完整句子；3) 给出具体变化例子（界面、功能、推荐系统）；4) 用一两句说明变化带来的影响。

例: Yes, the websites I use are often updated in both layout and features to improve usability. For example, my favourite news site recently added a dark mode and a personalized recommendation section, which makes it easier for me to find articles I care about.

提案: 回答内容清晰且相关，但有些重复（news and information, update/update）和小语法问题（many visit → many people visit）。建议：1) 用更具体的例子（names or types like social media, e-commerce）丰富答案；2) 使用连接词使句子流畅；3) 修正小语法错误。

例: In my country, news and information websites are very popular because people want to follow current events and local developments. For example, many people visit national news portals and social media pages every morning to catch up on headlines and discussions.

提案: 观点明确但表达啰嗦、有语法及搭配错误（a preference to get → prefer getting；It is meaning → This is because；a better standing → better understanding）。建议：1) 使用简洁句型直接比较网站和书籍；2) 修正常见短语和固定搭配；3) 给出具体情境说明何时更喜欢网站或书。

例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are quick to access and usually up to date, especially for news and technical topics. For example, when I need the latest research or live updates, I check online articles rather than books.

提案: 回答目的明确但表达重复且有语法问题（share my thoughts by myself, I don't worry about any others）。建议：1) 用更自然的表达说明用途（showcase my portfolio, share my ideas）；2) 避免重复同一意思；3) 补充如何设计或更新网站的具体计划。

例: Yes, I would like to have my own website to showcase my portfolio and share my ideas. For example, I would post project summaries, blog posts about my learning process, and a contact page for potential collaborators.

提案: 意思清楚但有较多语法和用词错误（Website that accessed with life and study → Websites related to life and study；efficient way to assess → efficient ways to access；research technicals → research techniques）。建议：1) 改正常见词组和名词复数；2) 用具体成果或技能举例（e.g. coding, citation, time-blocking）并说明效果；3) 保持句子简洁连贯。

例: Websites related to study have taught me practical skills and better study habits. For example, online courses improved my research techniques and time management by providing structured lessons and weekly plans, which helped me study more effectively.

× For me, I frequently visit news and educational websites.

✓ I frequently visit news and educational websites.

句子多餘使用“For me”造成冗餘。面試回答中直接陳述習慣更自然。建議刪除多餘片語或改為更簡潔表述。

× It is primarily because I like to stay informed and learn lots of new things.

✓ This is primarily because I like to stay informed and learn many new things.

使用代詞需與前句銜接，應用“This”指前述行為；“lots of”在正式語境中改為“many”更恰當。建議使用明確指示代詞並選擇正式用法。

× For example, I use turn it into check my assignment and the my grandma. Wrong.

✓ For example, I use websites to check my assignments and to communicate with my grandma.

原句詞序混亂且有多處語意不清。應明確表達用途：使用網站檢查作業（assignments）並與祖母溝通。建議重組句子，使用不定式或動詞短語表明目的。

× For me my favorite website is Bilibili since it offers lots of inter interesting videos about different aspects.

✓ My favourite website is Bilibili since it offers many interesting videos about different topics.

“inter interesting”是重複或打字錯誤；“lots of”在較正式回答中換為“many”更合適；“aspects”應改為“topics”以表達主題。建議檢查拼寫並選用準確詞彙。

× For example, I always learn some basic and theoretical knowledge from it and it really recharge my batteries.

✓ For example, I often learn basic and theoretical knowledge from it, and it really recharges my batteries.

主從句需用逗號連接；“recharge”應與主語一致加第三人稱單數-s（it recharges）；“always”可改為“often”更自然。建議注意主謂一致和副詞選擇。

× Sure, I often notice website I visit regularly undergo updates, especially in layout and functionality to improve the user experience.

✓ Sure, I often notice that websites I visit regularly undergo updates, especially in layout and functionality to improve the user experience.

“website”需用複數“websites”以與動詞“undergo”及語境一致；插入連接詞“that”使句子更完整。建議檢查名詞單複數與句子完整性。

× For example, new sites frequently redesign their home pages to make more accessible.

✓ For example, new sites frequently redesign their home pages to make them more accessible.

缺少賓語代詞“them”導致句子不完整。建議補充代詞或重寫以保持句子完整性。

× What's more, many sets and new features to catch the.

✓ What's more, many sites add new features to catch users' attention.

原句詞序與詞彙錯誤（sets? the.）且語意中斷。應改為“sites add new features to catch users' attention”。建議使用正確名詞並完整表達目的。

× In my country, I think news and information websites are extremely popular since people want to stay updated about the current events, politics and the local developments.

✓ In my country, I think news and information websites are extremely popular since people want to stay updated about current events, politics and local developments.

“the current events”與“the local developments”中定冠詞不必要，且“events/developments”通常不用“the”。建議刪除多餘定冠詞。

× For example, many visit national news website every morning to update the information.

✓ For example, many people visit national news websites every morning to get updated information.

缺少主語“people”；“website”應為複數“websites”；“update the information”用法不自然，改為“get updated information”。建議補主語並改正動詞短語。

× I have a preference to get the information from website.

✓ I prefer to get information from websites.

“have a preference to get”冗長且不自然；“website”應用複數或加冠詞。建議使用常見短語“prefer to”並將名詞改為複數。

× It is meaning because they are quick to access and often provide up to date content, especially for current events or technical topics.

✓ This is meaningful because they are quick to access and often provide up-to-date content, especially for current events or technical topics.

“It is meaning”不正確，應為“This is meaningful”或“This is convenient”；“up to date”作形容詞需連字符“up-to-date”。建議使用合適表達並注意連字符。

× For uh, when I use them, I can have a better standing of the current society and the whole world.

✓ When I use them, I can have a better understanding of current society and the world.

“For uh”為口語填充詞，應刪除；“standing”錯用，應為“understanding”；刪去多餘定冠詞“the”。建議避免口頭語並使用正確名詞。

× Having a personal site would allow me to showcase my work, share my thoughts by myself, and it's a private way to show my feelings and my thoughts that I don't worry about any others.

✓ Having a personal site would allow me to showcase my work, share my thoughts privately, and express feelings without worrying about others.

“share my thoughts by myself”用法不自然，應改為“share my thoughts privately”；“that I don't worry about any others”語法錯誤且表意不清，可改為“without worrying about others”。建議精簡表達並修正搭配。

× Website that accessed with life and study have taught me practical skills and efficient way to assess my information.

✓ Websites related to life and study have taught me practical skills and efficient ways to access information.

原句詞序錯誤：“Website that accessed with life and study”需改為“Websites related to life and study”；“efficient way to assess my information”中“assess”用錯，應為“access information”；“way”應為複數“ways”。建議重構短語並檢查動詞選擇。

× For example, educational platforms have improved my research technicals and time management by offering structured courses and study plans which help me develop better than before.

✓ For example, educational platforms have improved my research techniques and time management by offering structured courses and study plans that help me develop better than before.

“technicals”是錯誤名詞，應為“techniques”；“which”可改為“that”以引導限定性定語從句。建議使用正確名詞並注意從句連接詞。