Cars— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有较大问题，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

例: I didn't enjoy traveling by car when I was a kid because I often got car sick, which made the experience unpleasant.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，语法错误较多，建议使用正确的词汇和句型，清楚说明喜欢的车型及原因。

例: I prefer SUVs because they offer more headroom, which is important for me since I am taller than average.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不流畅，建议简化句子，明确表达喜欢当司机的原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer to be the driver because I like to be in control. When I am a passenger, I often feel nervous and anxious.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够连贯，建议使用连词连接句子，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: When there is a traffic jam, I usually listen to music or watch movies to distract myself and pass the time more enjoyably.

× Whenever the kids I have a 'cause I have I had a car sick so I don't like I didn't like a generic driver car to travel.

✓ Whenever I was a kid, I had car sickness, so I didn't like traveling by car.

原句中“the kids I have a 'cause I have I had a car sick”结构混乱，且“kids”复数用法不当，应表达“我小时候”。应使用单数形式和正确的表达方式。建议简化句子，明确表达“我小时候晕车”。

× Definitely I would say as UV because my head is over average of Chinese person.

✓ Definitely, I would say an SUV because my head is bigger than the average Chinese person's.

原句中“as UV”应为“an SUV”，且“Chinese person”应使用所有格形式“Chinese person's”，表示“平均中国人”的所有格。

× So I need I need more special says than other peoples.

✓ So I need more special space than other people.

“special says”应为“special space”，“peoples”错误复数形式，正确应为“people”。

× So when I was passengers I'm nervous and anxiety even I sit on the rail rail seats and I love to ask the driver how many time I need we.

✓ So when I am a passenger, I'm nervous and anxious even if I sit in the rear seats, and I like to ask the driver how much longer I need to wait.

“passengers”应为单数“a passenger”，“anxiety”应为形容词“anxious”，“rail rail seats”应为“rear seats”，“how many time”应为“how much longer”或“how much time”。

× Actually, we can't do anything but you read the. Lines.

✓ Actually, we can't do anything but read the lines.

“you read the. Lines”中“you”多余，应为“read the lines”，且句子不完整，去掉多余词语使句子通顺。

× In addition, I prefer to listen some music or maybe watching movies and to distract my attention.

✓ In addition, I prefer to listen to some music or maybe watch movies to distract my attention.

“listen some music”应为“listen to some music”，“watching movies”应改为动词原形“watch movies”，且“and to distract my attention”结构不当，改为“to distract my attention”。