Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về mối quan hệ với bạn đó.

例: Yes, I have a close friend from university whom I've known for about five years. We became best friends while supporting each other through our studies.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về hoạt động bạn làm với bạn bè.

例: I usually meet and chat with my friends on weekends because we are busy during the week. We often hang out or have coffee together on Saturdays or Sundays.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy mô tả cụ thể địa điểm và hoạt động khi gặp bạn bè.

例: We often meet in District 1 because it is between our homes. Usually, we walk around the shopping center and eat something there.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên mô tả cụ thể hơn về hoạt động khi đi chơi với bạn bè.

例: I usually hang out with my friends on weekends. We often buy some snacks and then go to the park where we sit and talk about our week.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói rõ vai trò của bạn bè trong cuộc sống bạn.

例: Friends are very important to me because I can share my feelings and thoughts with them. They also give me advice when I face difficulties.

提案: Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ sở thích của bạn với các tình huống khác nhau.

例: It depends on the situation. If a friend wants to talk and share feelings, I prefer spending time with her alone. But for outings, I enjoy being with a group of friends.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy mô tả rõ hơn về việc mời bạn bè đến nhà và hoạt động cùng nhau.

例: I enjoy hosting parties, so I often invite friends to my house. We usually order food through apps like Grab and spend time chatting together.

提案: Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về sự khác biệt giữa địa điểm gặp bạn bè trước và bây giờ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ.

例: In the past, I made friends easily with my neighbors because we lived in the same area. Now, I meet friends in many different places as I have grown up.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích cụ thể lý do tại sao một số nơi phù hợp để gặp gỡ bạn bè hơn những nơi khác.

例: I think it depends on the purpose of the place. For example, at a concert, you can easily meet people who share your interests, but other places may not be as suitable for making friends.

× she is my one of friends in university

✓ she is one of my friends at university

The phrase 'my one of friends' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'one of my friends'. Also, 'at university' is more appropriate than 'in university' when referring to being a student there.

× I have known her maybe about two or five, uh, four or five years

✓ I have known her for about four or five years

The present perfect tense 'have known' is correct, but the time expression should be 'for about four or five years' to indicate duration. The original sentence is unclear and redundant.

× I and her uh is best friend

✓ she and I are best friends

The subject pronouns should be 'she and I' and the verb should agree in plural form 'are'. Also, 'best friends' should be plural.

× we usually are meeting and chatting, uh, at the weekend

✓ we usually meet and chat at the weekend

The adverb 'usually' should come before the verb. Also, the present simple tense 'meet and chat' is more appropriate for habitual actions than the present continuous 'are meeting and chatting'.

× during, uh, the week, uh, we have go to work and study

✓ during the week, we have to go to work and study

The verb 'have' should be followed by 'to' when expressing obligation. Also, 'go' should be in base form after 'have to'.

× therefore just only, uh, our Saturday or Sunday we can uh, go hang out or drink coffee

✓ therefore, only on Saturday or Sunday can we go hang out or drink coffee

The phrase 'just only' is redundant; 'only' suffices. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing 'only on Saturday or Sunday' at the beginning and inverting the subject and modal verb.

× We often see each other at the District 1

✓ We often see each other in District 1

The preposition 'in' is used for areas or districts, not 'at'.

× as a District 1 is the center of, uh, my house and also her house

✓ as District 1 is the center between my house and her house

'District 1' is a proper noun and does not need an article 'a'. Also, the phrase is better expressed as 'the center between'.

× we usually go around the shopping center and, uh, to eat something on that

✓ we usually go around the shopping center and eat something there

The phrase 'to eat something on that' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'there' to indicate location.

× we just are buy something and then, uh, find the public ways

✓ we just buy something and then find public places

The phrase 'just are buy' is incorrect; it should be 'just buy'. Also, 'public ways' is incorrect; 'public places' is more appropriate.

× find the public ways, uh, such as the park

✓ find public places, such as the park

'Public ways' is not a correct phrase; 'public places' is appropriate when referring to locations like parks.

× we, uh, sit in our, our talk about the whole weekend that we have

✓ we sit and talk about the whole weekend we had

The phrase is awkward and unclear. The correction uses 'sit and talk' which is more natural, and 'we had' refers to past events.

× I think our friends is also the little part of my life

✓ I think our friends are also a small part of my life

The subject 'friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'a small part' is more natural than 'the little part'.

× whenever I have a stroke or something, I can find them to, uh, express my feeling and my thoughts

✓ whenever I have a problem or something, I can turn to them to express my feelings and thoughts

'Have a stroke' is incorrect in this context; 'have a problem' is appropriate. Also, 'find them to express' is awkward; 'turn to them to express' is better. 'Feelings' should be plural.

× they also give me an advice, uh, for me

✓ they also give me advice

'Advice' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'an'. Also, 'for me' is redundant.

× it also depend on, uh, what kind of, uh, events

✓ it also depends on what kind of events

The verb should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'on' is the correct preposition after 'depend'.

× if my friends just want to uh, talk and, uh, express her feeling

✓ if my friend just wants to talk and express her feelings

'Friends' is plural but 'her' is singular; should be consistent. Also, 'friend' singular with 'wants' third person singular verb. 'Feelings' plural.

× I'm the kind of person who like party

✓ I'm the kind of person who likes parties

The verb should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject 'person'. Also, 'party' should be plural 'parties'.

× we are order food on, uh, many apps like uh, crab or Shopee

✓ we order food through many apps like Grab or Shopee

The verb form should be 'order' not 'are order'. The preposition 'through' is used for apps. Also, 'Grab' is the correct name.

× we are sitting to together

✓ we are sitting together

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I I easily make a friends with my neighbor because we living in in in the same in the same, in the same LA

✓ I easily made friends with my neighbor because we lived in the same LA

Past tense 'made' and 'lived' are needed to match the past time frame. Also, 'friends' plural without 'a'.

× I have a lot of place to make a friend

✓ I have a lot of places to make friends

'Place' should be plural 'places'. Also, 'make friends' is the correct phrase.

× I think it depend on umm, the target of the one to go

✓ I think it depends on the purpose of the person going

The verb should be 'depends' for singular subject 'it'. 'Target of the one to go' is unclear; 'purpose of the person going' is clearer.

× if you go to concert, you can easily, uh, make a friend with people who have the same, uh, habit with you

✓ if you go to a concert, you can easily make friends with people who have the same habits as you

Article 'a' is needed before 'concert'. 'Make friends' plural is correct. 'Habits as you' is the correct comparison.