Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến cách sử dụng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have a few friends I've known for a long time, but my best friend is from high school. We share many interests and have a very close bond. She's very friendly and kind, and I really enjoy spending time with her.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'were' thay vì 'was'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'have the catch up'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: When we were younger, we used to study together and often went to a nearby cafe to catch up during our free time. However, now we are both busy with work and family, so we rarely meet in person.

提案: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'she sleeping' thay vì 'she is living' hoặc 'she lives'. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'commencing'.

例: She currently lives in Australia, so we don't have many chances to meet face to face. However, we keep in touch regularly by messaging each other on Facebook and commenting on each other's posts. This helps us stay connected despite the distance.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'didn't have chance' nên là 'don't have the chance'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp.

例: Not very often at the moment. As I mentioned, my best friend is not in Vietnam, so we don't have the chance to meet face to face. Also, I am quite busy with work and family, so I don't hang out with friends much.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

例: Friends are very important to me. Since I am an introvert, I don't have many friends, but my close friend plays a very important role in my life because she understands me and I share many stories with her.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'Brought the new group of friends' và 'scenery interactions with the fruit'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer spending time with one close friend rather than a group because I feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations. This way, I can share personal details and catch up more meaningfully. Also, since I don't have many friends, I value deep interactions with the few I have.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như 'I living' nên là 'I live', 'quite inconvenience' nên là 'quite inconvenient'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp.

例: Yes, I used to invite friends to my home, but not anymore because I live in a small, crowded house with my family. It is quite inconvenient to have friends over now.

× we share many things in common's

✓ we share many things in common

The phrase 'in common's' is incorrect because 'common' is an adjective here and should not be possessive. The correct phrase is 'in common' without an apostrophe and 's'. This is a plural issue because 'things' is plural and 'in common' is a fixed expression.

× So when I were younger we kind of studying at school together

✓ So when I was younger we kind of studied at school together

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. Also, 'studying' should be in past tense 'studied' to match the past time frame. This is a past tense issue.

× so whenever we have free time we just went to the cafe nearby our school to have the catch up with our daily lives

✓ so whenever we had free time we just went to the cafe near our school to catch up with our daily lives

The phrase 'have free time' should be in past tense 'had free time' to match the past context. Also, 'nearby our school' should be 'near our school' (preposition issue, but not corrected here as per instructions). 'to have the catch up' is incorrect; it should be 'to catch up'. The main correction here is the past tense of 'have'.

× But now today we both busy with our works and family so we don't usually spend time to meet face to face anymore

✓ But now today we are both busy with our work and family so we don't usually spend time meeting face to face anymore

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' for the present tense 'we are both busy'. Also, 'works' should be 'work' (uncountable noun). 'Spend time to meet' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time meeting'. The main issue is present tense verb usage.

× Currently she sleeping in Australia so we don't have many opportunities to meet face to face

✓ Currently she is sleeping in Australia so we don't have many opportunities to meet face to face

The verb 'sleeping' needs the auxiliary verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense 'she is sleeping'. This is a present tense issue.

× However we still keep in touch regularly by messaging each other on Facebook and often catch up by commencing on each others post

✓ However we still keep in touch regularly by messaging each other on Facebook and often catch up by commenting on each other's posts

The word 'commencing' is incorrect; it should be 'commenting'. Also, 'each others post' should be 'each other's posts' (possessive and plural). This is an incorrect use of prepositions and possessive forms, but only correcting preposition-related errors as per instructions.

× so we didn't have chance to meet face to face

✓ so we didn't have a chance to meet face to face

The phrase 'have chance' is missing the article 'a' before 'chance'. Although this is an article error, it is closely related to the past tense structure 'didn't have a chance'. The main issue is the missing article.

× An also I am kind of busy with my work, my family, so I didn't really hang out with my friend

✓ And also I am kind of busy with my work and my family, so I don't really hang out with my friend

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the speaker is currently busy, the second clause should be in present tense 'don't really hang out'. Also, 'An' should be 'And'. This is a present tense issue.

× my close friend play a very important role in my life

✓ my close friend plays a very important role in my life

The subject 'my close friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'plays' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue (subject-verb agreement).

× because she can she she is the one who understand me and who I share a lot. Of stories with

✓ because she is the one who understands me and with whom I share a lot of stories

The original sentence has repeated words 'she can she she' and incorrect sentence structure. The verb 'understand' should be 'understands' to agree with singular subject 'who'. Also, 'who I share a lot. Of stories with' is fragmented and should be restructured. This is a sentence structure error.

× Brought the new group of friends because I'm more comfortable in one-on-one conversations

✓ Not with a new group of friends because I'm more comfortable in one-on-one conversations

The word 'Brought' is incorrect and does not fit the sentence. It should be 'Not with a new group of friends' or similar. This is a sentence structure error.

× I value deep and scenery interactions with the fruit with a few I have

✓ I value deep and sincere interactions with the few friends I have

The word 'scenery' is incorrect; it should be 'sincere'. Also, 'fruit' is incorrect; it should be 'friends'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and nouns.

× Yeah, I did in the past, but not. Anymore because now I'm living in the small crowded house and I living with my family in Lars

✓ Yeah, I did in the past, but not anymore because now I'm living in a small crowded house and I live with my family in Lars

The phrase 'but not. Anymore' should be 'but not anymore' without a period. Also, 'I living' should be 'I live'. 'the small crowded house' should be 'a small crowded house' (article error). The main issue is past tense and present tense verb forms.

× now I'm living in the small crowded house

✓ now I'm living in a small crowded house

The definite article 'the' is incorrect here because the house is not previously specified. The indefinite article 'a' should be used. This is an article error.

× so it is quite inconvenience for me to invite friends to come to my house

✓ so it is quite inconvenient for me to invite friends to come to my house

The word 'inconvenience' is a noun; the adjective 'inconvenient' should be used here. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.