Advertisement— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如冠词使用不当和动词形式错误，表达不够流畅。建议注意冠词的使用（a/an/the），动词时态和单复数形式，同时丰富细节，使回答更自然。

例: Yes, I remember an advertisement for baby formula that left a strong impression on me because of its touching music and the story about a mother caring for her child.

提案: 回答中存在单复数错误和表达重复，建议注意名词复数形式和避免冗余，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I see many advertisements on the MRT, trains, and even on the streets. Advertising is basically everywhere around us.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点和理由。

例: Yes, I like advertisements because some of them are enjoyable and fun, which enrich our lives. Additionally, advertisements help people learn more about new products and services.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误明显，缺少结尾和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的主谓一致，并补充具体例子。

例: I like video advertisements the most because some TV ads are very interesting and entertaining; they can make people laugh and feel happy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用完整句子，避免口语化表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially when I browse the Internet. Sometimes, ads pop up on my favorite pages, which can be quite annoying.

× Yes, I remember there was a advertisement, it's a baby formula and it really have impression on me because the music, it's about a mom.

✓ Yes, I remember there was an advertisement, it's a baby formula and it really has an impression on me because of the music, it's about a mom.

冠词使用错误。'advertisement' 以元音音素开头，应该用不定冠词 'an' 而不是 'a'。此外，'have' 应改为第三人称单数 'has'，因为主语是单数 'it'。'impression' 前应加不定冠词 'an'。'because the music' 应改为 'because of the music'，正确使用介词。

× Yes, I see many advertisement on the MRT and also on the train as well as the street.

✓ Yes, I see many advertisements on the MRT and also on the train as well as the street.

名词复数形式错误。'advertisement' 应为复数 'advertisements'，因为前面有数量词 'many'。

× Advertisement is basically everywhere surrounding our world.

✓ Advertisements are basically everywhere surrounding our world.

主谓一致错误。'Advertisement' 应为复数 'Advertisements'，与谓语 'are' 一致，表示广告无处不在。

× Yes, I pretty much advertisement because some advertisement are very enjoyable and very fun which enrich our lives.

✓ Yes, I pretty much like advertisements because some advertisements are very enjoyable and very fun which enrich our lives.

量词使用错误。'pretty much' 后应接动词 'like'，'advertisement' 应为复数 'advertisements'。

× Additional Lee advertisement can let people know more about.

✓ Additionally, advertisements can let people know more about things.

连词和拼写错误。'Additional Lee' 应为副词 'Additionally'。'advertisement' 应为复数 'advertisements'。句子不完整，需补充宾语。

× I like video advertisements the most because some advertisement on the TV is very interesting and entertaining which make people laugh and also some advertisement on TV is.

✓ I like video advertisements the most because some advertisements on TV are very interesting and entertaining which make people laugh.

名词复数形式错误。'advertisement' 应为复数 'advertisements'。谓语动词应与复数主语一致，'is' 改为 'are'。句子末尾不完整，去掉多余部分。

× Yes, I always see advertisement on my phone or on my computer, especially when I search the Internet.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements on my phone or on my computer, especially when I search the Internet.

名词复数形式错误。'advertisement' 应为复数 'advertisements'，表示多个广告。

× Or the ads just bump into my pet peeve page which sometimes very annoying.

✓ Sometimes the ads just pop up on my pet peeve page, which is very annoying.

句子结构错误。'Or' 开头不合适，改为 'Sometimes'。'bump into' 用法错误，改为 'pop up'。缺少系动词 'is'。