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提案: 回答中存在大量重复和犹豫词，表达不够流畅且信息不具体。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达，并提供具体细节来丰富答案。

例: Yes, I remember a medicine advertisement from my childhood that promised quick recovery. It showed a child feeling better after taking the medicine, which made a strong impression on me.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的理由。

例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains, MRT, and buses. I think these ads are effective because passengers have plenty of time to notice them during their commute.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且信息不够具体。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并举例说明。

例: Actually, I find advertisements interesting because they help me learn about new products and how to use them, especially those on public transportation.

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊。建议理清思路，使用连接词，并具体说明喜欢的广告类型及原因。

例: I like advertisements at the beginning of podcasts because I listen to podcasts often, and these ads introduce me to new apps that I might find useful.

提案: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，缺乏具体细节。建议避免重复，完成句子，并举例说明广告出现的具体情况。

例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer, especially on social media platforms like Instagram and YouTube. For example, when my friends and I discuss certain topics, related ads often appear.

× Yes, I can see a lot of advertising on trends or MRT or bus.

✓ Yes, I can see a lot of advertising on trains or MRT or buses.

这里的“trends”和“bus”应使用复数形式“trains”和“buses”，因为表示多种交通工具。名词复数形式错误属于单复数问题。

× And I think that the advertising on these transportation is very useful because when people will see it very easily.

✓ And I think that the advertising on these transportation is very useful because people can see it very easily.

句中“when people will see”使用了不恰当的将来时，表示习惯或事实时应使用一般现在时或情态动词。

× Actually I think that advertisement is very interesting and buying the advertisements on the transportation, I can know a lot of new product and how it works.

✓ Actually I think that advertisements are very interesting and by seeing the advertisements on the transportation, I can learn about a lot of new products and how they work.

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且“product”应为复数“products”，因为表示多个产品。

× Actually I think that advertisement is very interesting and buying the advertisements on the transportation, I can know a lot of new product and how it works.

✓ Actually I think that advertisements are very interesting and by seeing the advertisements on the transportation, I can learn about a lot of new products and how they work.

“buying the advertisements on the transportation”表达不当，应改为“by seeing the advertisements”，使用正确的介词短语表达方式。

× I like the the advertising that is and at the first of the podcast because I listen to the podcast more now, so I often listen to the new app.

✓ I like the advertising that is at the beginning of the podcast because I listen to podcasts more now, so I often listen to new apps.

“podcast”应为复数“podcasts”，表示多个播客；“app”应为复数“apps”，表示多个应用。

× I like the the advertising that is and at the first of the podcast because I listen to the podcast more now, so I often listen to the new app.

✓ I like the advertising that is at the beginning of the podcast because I listen to podcasts more now, so I often listen to new apps.

“at the first of the podcast”表达不正确，应为“at the beginning of the podcast”，使用正确的介词短语。

× For example, if I and if my my friends and I are discussing.

✓ For example, if my friends and I are discussing.

句中“if I and if my my friends and I”重复且顺序不当，应简化为“my friends and I”，符合英语习惯。