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提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“hang the tomb”应为“humming the tune”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I remember an advertisement called Xijilong, which was a product by Julie. The background music was so catchy that I used to hum the tune all the time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“bus”应为“buses”，“new product”应为“new products”，“These arts are quite ice”应为“These ads are quite nice”。建议注意复数形式和拼写，表达更准确。

例: Yes, I often see a variety of advertisements on trains, subways, and buses. For example, posters are used to promote movies, and electronic screens display new products. These ads are quite nice.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但“the advertisement”应为“advertisements”，且句子可以更自然流畅。建议使用更地道的表达方式。

例: I don't like advertisements when I watch movies because they interrupt the story and waste my time. They also make me feel annoyed.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误，“sport advertisement”应为“sports advertisements”，“Atlantis”应为“athletes”。建议注意拼写和词汇的准确使用，使表达更自然。

例: I like sports advertisements because I'm a big fan of sports and enjoy watching various sports events. These ads often show athletes' determination and hard work, which makes me admire them.

提案: 回答中“some advertisement”应为“some advertisements”，表达可以更自然。建议注意复数形式和句子流畅性。

例: Yes, I often see some advertisements when I use apps on my phone or websites on my computer. For example, when I use a mobile app to open the door, an advertisement usually pops up.

× The background music was so catchy that I used to hang the tomb all the time.

✓ The background music was so catchy that I used to hum the tune all the time.

这里的'hang the tomb'是错误的表达，正确的应该是'hum the tune'，表示哼唱旋律。此处是词汇错误，不属于语法问题，但为了表达正确，做了修正。

× I often see a variety of advertisements on trains, subways and bus.

✓ I often see a variety of advertisements on trains, subways and buses.

bus是可数名词，表示复数时应加复数形式buses，保持与前面trains和subways一致。

× For example, using posters to promote movies and using electronic screens to display new product.

✓ For example, using posters to promote movies and using electronic screens to display new products.

product是可数名词，表示复数时应加复数形式products，保持与前面movies一致。

× These arts are quite ice.

✓ These ads are quite nice.

arts用法不当，应为ads（广告）。'ice'是名词，错误使用，应为形容词'nice'表示“好”。

× I don't like the advertisement when I watch movies because they interrupt the story and waste my time.

✓ I don't like advertisements when I watch movies because they interrupt the story and waste my time.

advertisement在此处应使用复数形式advertisements，因为后文用they指代多个广告。

× I like sport advertisement because I'm a big fan of sports and enjoy watching various sports events.

✓ I like sports advertisements because I'm a big fan of sports and enjoy watching various sports events.

sport advertisement应为复数sports advertisements，保持与sports events一致，且sports作为形容词修饰advertisements时应使用复数形式。

× These ads often show Atlantis determination and hard work which make me admire them.

✓ These ads often show athletes' determination and hard work which make me admire them.

'Atlantis'用词错误，应为'athletes'（运动员），且需要所有格形式表示“运动员的决心”。

× I often see some advertisement when I use my phone app or computer website.

✓ I often see some advertisements when I use my phone app or computer website.

advertisement应使用复数形式advertisements，因为这里指的是多个广告。

× When I need to use the mobile app to open the door, the advertisement pulls up.

✓ When I need to use the mobile app to open the door, advertisements pop up.

'pulls up'用法不当，正确表达应为'pop up'表示广告弹出；且advertisement应使用复数形式advertisements。