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提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'just' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, provide more specific details about the advertisement, such as the name of the amusement park or what made the song catchy, to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I remember an advertisement for Luna Park that featured a lively, catchy song encouraging families to visit. The bright colours and cheerful music really caught my attention and made me want to go there.

提案: Avoid repeating words like 'advert advertisements' and filler words such as 'uh' and 'I think'. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide more specific examples of the advertisements you see.

例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on the MRT, especially promoting travel destinations and cooking products. These ads usually feature colourful images and catchy slogans that attract passengers' attention.

提案: Try to speak more clearly and avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and 'umm'. Make your answer more concise and structured by stating your opinion first, then giving clear reasons with examples.

例: Yes, I like advertisements because they inspire me to try new products and add some fun to my daily routine. For example, a recent ad for a new snack made me curious to try it.

提案: Avoid excessive filler words and repetition. Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to explain why you prefer certain types of advertisements and provide specific examples.

例: I prefer advertisements with catchy songs and memorable lyrics because they stick in my mind and grab my attention quickly. For instance, the Coca-Cola Christmas ads always have great music that I remember.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and by providing a specific example of when ads were distracting.

例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer. However, sometimes there are too many, which can be quite annoying. For example, when I'm trying to study online, pop-up ads often distract me from concentrating.

× Yes, I think there was a amusement park advertisement with a very catchy song and just, uh, encouraging parents to take children to their amusement park and I think that was very appealing to me.

✓ Yes, I think there was an amusement park advertisement with a very catchy song and just, uh, encouraging parents to take children to their amusement park and I think that was very appealing to me.

The error is the use of 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound ('amusement'). The correct article is 'an' to ensure smooth pronunciation and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do like advertisement because, you know, by watching advertisements you can somehow get some inspirations of what you're gonna buy or, or is there any chance of, umm, adding some other fun into your daily lives? So I think advertisement is great.

✓ Yes, I do like advertisements because, you know, by watching advertisements you can somehow get some inspiration of what you're gonna buy or, or is there any chance of, umm, adding some other fun into your daily lives? So I think advertisements are great.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context of general liking. Also, 'inspirations' should be singular 'inspiration' as it is an uncountable noun in this context. Additionally, 'advertisement is great' should be 'advertisements are great' to agree in number.

× What I really prefer advertising with a catchy songs and memorable lyrics because basically that makes it very, uh, memorable and it can catch my eyes very easily and, and, and, uh, encourage me to, uh, understand what is.

✓ What I really prefer is advertising with catchy songs and memorable lyrics because basically that makes it very, uh, memorable and it can catch my eye very easily and, and, and, uh, encourage me to, uh, understand what it is.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'prefer'. 'A catchy songs' is incorrect because 'songs' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Catch my eyes' should be 'catch my eye' as the idiomatic expression uses singular 'eye'. The sentence ending 'understand what is' is incomplete and should be 'understand what it is' for clarity.

× Yes, there are lots of advertisements on phones or computer, but I think sometimes it's just too much of it and it can be annoying.

✓ Yes, there are lots of advertisements on phones or computers, but I think sometimes it's just too much of it and it can be annoying.

The word 'computer' should be plural 'computers' to match the plural 'phones' and the general context of multiple devices.