Advertisement— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, there, yes, there was umm, cumin advertisement, uh, that really impressed me when I was a child. It was played in the form of a Chinese traditional, uh, opera and the lyrics was very uh, catchy and umm, this made the advertisement both interesting and and informative.
試験官
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
受験者
Yes yes, nowadays advertisements are everywhere. Uh, we can, I can see a lot of umm, advertising on trains, umm, for some interest of places or uh, wines, umm, and umm uh, even on buses they have advertisements uh.
試験官
Do you like advertisements?
受験者
I have a mixed feeling about advertisements. Many of the many of them are quite overwhelming and keep showing up which is very annoying. Well other forms of advertisements like they giving they give you some discount coupons are very practical and I like them.
試験官
What kind of advertising do you like?
受験者
1st I like advertisements like that send send me a discount coupons which helps me save to save money and the second I like advertisements that is have storylines which can.
試験官
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
受験者
Uh, yes, umm, quite a lot of, uh, ads when you are on my phone or computer, umm, such as uh, uh, discounting coupons and, uh, and the pop-up, uh, advertisements, umm, but selling various goods, yeah.
評価
総合
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更自然连贯的表达，并注意语法，如“lyrics was”应为“lyrics were”。
例: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It was presented as a traditional Chinese opera with catchy lyrics, which made it both interesting and informative.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在重复和语气词过多，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体例子。
例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses, such as promotions for tourist attractions and wine brands.
Do you like advertisements?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更准确的语法表达观点。
例: I have mixed feelings about advertisements. Many are overwhelming and annoying, but I like those that offer discount coupons because they are practical.
What kind of advertising do you like?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，注意主谓一致和句子结构，避免重复。
例: Firstly, I like advertisements that send me discount coupons because they help me save money. Secondly, I enjoy ads with interesting storylines that capture my attention.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中充满语气词，表达不够流畅。建议减少填充词，使用完整句子，并具体说明广告类型。
例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on my phone and computer, such as discount coupons and pop-up ads selling various products.
文法
× the lyrics was very uh, catchy
✓ the lyrics were very uh, catchy
lyrics 是复数形式，谓语动词应使用复数形式 were，而不是单数 was。
× advertisements like that send send me a discount coupons
✓ advertisements like that send me discount coupons
discount coupons 是复数，前面的限定词应为复数形式，且 send 不需要重复。
× ads when you are on my phone or computer
✓ ads when I am on my phone or computer
主语人称不一致，句中应保持第一人称一致，使用 I 而非 you。
× advertisements that is have storylines
✓ advertisements that have storylines
advertisements 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 have，而不是单数 is have。
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