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提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，明确表达印象深刻的广告内容，并避免重复。

例: When I was a child, I was impressed by a food advertisement on TV because the food looked very delicious and appealing.

提案: 回答较为简单，语气中有过多的填充词。建议减少“uh”等语气词，使用更自然流畅的表达，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport like subways and trains, especially posters and digital screens.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复的填充词。建议使用更准确的语法，表达观点时更具体，并减少无意义的停顿。

例: I like advertisements because some of them are interesting and they help me pass the time when I'm bored.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误严重。建议明确说明喜欢的广告类型，并用完整句子表达原因。

例: I like food advertisements because when I am hungry, they help me decide what to eat.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不通顺。建议简化句子结构，准确表达在手机或电脑上看到广告的情况。

例: Yes, I often see advertisements on social media platforms like TikTok when I use my phone to pass the time.

× When I was a child I was impressed by advertisement which is about food and the food is delicious on TV so it make me impressing.

✓ When I was a child, I was impressed by advertisements which were about food and the food was delicious on TV, so it made me impressed.

advertisement 应该用复数形式 advertisements，因为这里指的是多个广告。动词 make 应该用过去式 made，因为描述的是过去的事情。

× When I was a child I was impressed by advertisement which is about food and the food is delicious on TV so it make me impressing.

✓ When I was a child, I was impressed by advertisements which were about food and the food was delicious on TV, so it made me impressed.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，动词 make 应该用第三人称单数过去式 made。

× When I was a child I was impressed by advertisement which is about food and the food is delicious on TV so it make me impressing.

✓ When I was a child, I was impressed by advertisements which were about food and the food was delicious on TV, so it made me impressed.

动词后面不应该接动名词 impressing，这里应该用过去分词 impressed 来表达被动的感觉。

× Uh, yes. Uh, when you take some public transport such as subway or trains, uh, you can see a lot of advertisement.

✓ Uh, yes. Uh, when you take some public transport such as subway or trains, uh, you can see a lot of advertisements.

advertisement 应该用复数形式 advertisements，因为这里指的是多个广告。

× Uh, for me, I like the advertisement because I think, uh, some advertisements is interesting and it also can help me to kill the time.

✓ Uh, for me, I like advertisements because I think, uh, some advertisements are interesting and they also can help me to kill time.

advertisement 应该用复数形式 advertisements。some advertisements 是复数，谓语动词应该用复数 are。kill the time 中 the 不需要，应该是 kill time。

× Uh, for me, I like the advertisement because I think, uh, some advertisements is interesting and it also can help me to kill the time.

✓ Uh, for me, I like advertisements because I think, uh, some advertisements are interesting and they also can help me to kill time.

some advertisements 是复数，谓语动词应该用复数 are。it 指代复数 advertisements 应该用 they。

× Uh, I left advertisements to show some foods, uh, when I was hungry on this advertisement can make me to decide, uh, how I want to eat.

✓ Uh, I like advertisements that show some foods, uh, when I am hungry. These advertisements can help me decide, uh, how I want to eat.

left 应该是 like。foods 一般用 food 表示食物的总称。advertisement 应该用复数 advertisements。make me to decide 中 to 不需要。

× Uh, I left advertisements to show some foods, uh, when I was hungry on this advertisement can make me to decide, uh, how I want to eat.

✓ Uh, I like advertisements that show some foods, uh, when I am hungry. These advertisements can help me decide, uh, how I want to eat.

on this advertisement 用法不当，应该用 These advertisements 指代前文提到的广告。

× Uh, I left advertisements to show some foods, uh, when I was hungry on this advertisement can make me to decide, uh, how I want to eat.

✓ Uh, I like advertisements that show some foods, uh, when I am hungry. These advertisements can help me decide, uh, how I want to eat.

left 是过去式，语境中应该用现在时 like。

× Uh yes uh, I usually use the social media to scale my time and when washed showed media I always will watch some advertisement in Tiktok.

✓ Uh yes, uh, I usually use social media to kill time and when I watch social media, I always watch some advertisements on TikTok.

social media 是不可数名词，不需要加 the。scale my time 用法错误，应该是 kill time。washed showed media 是错误表达，应该是 I watch social media。advertisement 应该用复数 advertisements。in TikTok 应该用 on TikTok。