Advertisement— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够完整且语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地描述广告内容，并注意冠词和名词单复数的正确使用。

例: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a brand called Manning that featured an orange cat. It was very memorable because the cat was very cute and funny.

提案: 回答中存在用词不当和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的词汇描述交通工具上的广告，并且避免重复。

例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport, such as buses and at the NTL station.

提案: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议先明确表达喜欢或不喜欢广告的观点，然后用具体例子支持观点。

例: I think advertisements can be helpful, but sometimes they are annoying, especially the ones that interrupt videos on YouTube.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，表达不够流畅。建议清楚描述喜欢的广告类型，并用具体例子说明。

例: I like advertisements that are impressive and creative. For example, I saw an air conditioner ad that used a funny mix of Cantonese and English, which made it very memorable.

× Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me pretty much, which is a advertisement about brand called Manning and there was a orange colored cat which called.

✓ Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me pretty much, which is an advertisement about a brand called Manning and there was an orange colored cat which was called.

句中“a advertisement”应为“an advertisement”，因为advertisement以元音音素开头，冠词应使用an；“a orange colored cat”应为“an orange colored cat”，同理冠词使用错误。

× Yes, I often see numerous advertisements on different traffic.

✓ Yes, I often see numerous advertisements on different types of transport.

“different traffic”用法不当，traffic通常不可数且不用于表示交通工具，应改为“different types of transport”更准确。

× For example, I often see lightweight advertisement on NTL station or on the bus.

✓ For example, I often see lightweight advertisements on NTL station or on the bus.

“advertisement”应使用复数形式“advertisements”，因为前文提到“numerous advertisements”，且此处指多个广告。

× Advertisement are usually really helpful or marketing.

✓ Advertisements are usually really helpful for marketing.

“Advertisement”应为复数“Advertisements”，且“or marketing”搭配不当，应为“helpful for marketing”。

× However, I think for customers advertisement is quite ignoring sometimes because when I am watching YouTube they are often umm advertisement that interrupts me which effects my experience.

✓ However, I think for customers advertisements are quite annoying sometimes because when I am watching YouTube there are often advertisements that interrupt me which affect my experience.

“advertisement is quite ignoring”用词错误，应为“advertisements are quite annoying”；“they are often umm advertisement”应为“there are often advertisements”；“which effects”应为“which affect”，主谓一致。

× I like advertisement that are impressive and mind opening.

✓ I like advertisements that are impressive and mind-opening.

“advertisement”应为复数“advertisements”，且“mind opening”应连字符连接为“mind-opening”。

× For example I watch an advertisement about air conditioner before and this advertisement use a funny combination of Cantonese and career so it's impressive.

✓ For example, I watched an advertisement about an air conditioner before and this advertisement uses a funny combination of Cantonese and career, so it's impressive.

“watch”时态应为过去时“watched”；“air conditioner”前应加冠词“an”；“use”应为第三人称单数“uses”；句中缺少逗号分隔；“career”可能为拼写错误，应确认。