Advertisement— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to form a complete sentence directly answering the question, and provide specific details about the advertisement that impressed you. Use linking words to improve flow.

例: Yes, I remember a food advertisement from my childhood that had a catchy song, which made it very memorable and enjoyable to watch.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

例: Yes, I often see advertisements on various public transport, such as trains, buses, and metro stations. In fact, advertising is quite widespread throughout Taiwan.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat disorganised and contains filler words. Try to speak more fluently and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

例: I usually don't like advertisements, especially on platforms like YouTube, where they often interrupt videos unless you have a paid membership.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar to express your ideas clearly.

例: I prefer advertisements that raise awareness about important issues, such as environmental protection or warning people about scams.

× I think that advertisement with food and usually with the lyrics or so badly easily to remember.

✓ I think that advertisements with food and usually with the lyrics are so easy to remember.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the singular 'advertisement' when referring to advertisements in general, which should be plural. Also, the phrase 'so badly easily to remember' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'so easy to remember' to correctly express the idea. The verb 'are' is added to complete the sentence structure.

× Yes, I do see a lot of advertising on the trains or bus, outside the bus and also in MRT, in the metro, also in the station.

✓ Yes, I do see a lot of advertising on the trains or buses, outside the buses and also in the MRT, in the metro, also in the stations.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms inconsistently. 'Trains' is plural, so 'bus' should be plural as 'buses' to match. Similarly, 'station' should be plural 'stations' to be consistent with the context of multiple locations.

× Yeah, I think Taiwan advertisement is all around.

✓ Yeah, I think Taiwan advertisements are all around.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because it refers to multiple ads. Also, the verb 'is' should be changed to 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× I usually don't actually like advertisement because like for example when I'm watching YouTube there always uh, is because I'm not a private member, so there always advertisement to interrupt the music.

✓ I usually don't actually like advertisements because, for example, when I'm watching YouTube, there are always ads since I'm not a private member, so there are always advertisements interrupting the music.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to refer to multiple ads. The phrase 'there always uh, is' is incorrect; it should be 'there are always' to match plural subject. Also, 'to interrupt the music' is better expressed as 'interrupting the music' to indicate ongoing action.

× I do like the advertising that like raise the borders about some important issues like protecting the environment or like warn the people about the scam like this.

✓ I do like advertising that raises awareness about some important issues like protecting the environment or warns people about scams like this.

The phrase 'raise the borders' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'raises awareness'. Also, 'like warn the people' should be 'warns people' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form. The preposition 'about' is correctly used here.