Advertisement— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, there is some advertisement or. Uhm. Have a message on a meaning that's affected me a lot.
試験官
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
受験者
Yes, I do see a lot of advertising on train and transports. I think it's important thing.
試験官
Do you like advertisements?
受験者
Yes, I do. I think it's a beautiful thing, an important thing to see everyday, to see another project.
試験官
What kind of advertising do you like?
受験者
I believe I like at a food advertising. I think there.
評価
総合
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
スコア: 50.0提案: حاول تكون إجابتك أوضح وأكثر تنظيماً، وابتعد عن التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل منطقي.
例: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It was about environmental protection, and its message about saving trees really affected me deeply.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
スコア: 60.0提案: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر اكتمالاً مع ربط الأفكار باستخدام أدوات الربط، وقدم أمثلة أو أسباب لتوضيح رأيك.
例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. I think these ads are important because they reach many people during their daily commute.
Do you like advertisements?
スコア: 55.0提案: حاول التعبير عن رأيك بشكل أكثر وضوحاً وقدم أسباباً محددة تدعم وجهة نظرك مع استخدام مفردات مناسبة.
例: Yes, I like advertisements because they introduce new products and ideas. Seeing them every day keeps me informed about different projects and innovations.
What kind of advertising do you like?
スコア: 40.0提案: حاول أن تكون إجابتك كاملة وواضحة، وقدم تفاصيل محددة عن نوع الإعلانات التي تفضلها ولماذا، مع استخدام جمل مترابطة.
例: I like food advertisements the most because they show delicious meals and new recipes, which inspire me to try different dishes.
文法
× Yes, there is some advertisement or.
✓ Yes, there are some advertisements.
The noun 'advertisement' is countable and should be plural when referring to more than one. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun. This is a singular and plural issue.
× Have a message on a meaning that's affected me a lot.
✓ It has a message or meaning that has affected me a lot.
The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb structure, making it incomplete. Adding 'It has' clarifies the subject and verb, correcting the sentence structure.
× Yes, I do see a lot of advertising on train and transports.
✓ Yes, I do see a lot of advertising on trains and transport.
The noun 'train' should be plural 'trains' to match 'a lot of advertising' which implies multiple instances. 'Transports' is not commonly used in plural; 'transport' as a mass noun is appropriate here. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I think it's important thing.
✓ I think it's an important thing.
The phrase 'important thing' requires an article 'an' before it. The omission of the article is an error in quantifier usage.
× I think it's a beautiful thing, an important thing to see everyday, to see another project.
✓ I think it's a beautiful thing, an important thing to see every day, to see another project.
The word 'everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal; the correct phrase here is 'every day' meaning each day. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word form.
× I believe I like at a food advertising.
✓ I believe I like food advertising.
The preposition 'at' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'food advertising'. Removing 'at' corrects the sentence.
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