Computers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşu və qrammatika üzərində işləməlisiniz. Daha təbii və axıcı ifadələr istifadə edin, məsələn, "I use a computer especially during my lessons with primary and secondary students because they enjoy working with technology." Daha qısa və konkret cavablar verin.

例: I usually use a computer during my lessons with primary and secondary students because they enjoy working with technology. Nowadays, children are very interested in technology, which helps them learn better.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər var və ifadələr bir az qarışıqdır. Daha aydın və düzgün cümlələr qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, "I had a computer since childhood but didn't use it much for education. At university, I started using it more for preparing presentations."

例: I had a computer since I was a child, but I didn't use it much for educational purposes. However, when I started university, I began using it more often to prepare presentations for my classes.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli edin. Məsələn, "Computers play an important role in education. Without them, it would be difficult to study effectively. Although phones can help, computers are more useful."

例: Computers play an important role in our education. Without a computer, it would be difficult to complete educational tasks efficiently. Although we can use phones or other devices, computers are much more effective for studying.

提案: Cavabınız yaxşıdır, lakin daha təbii ifadələr və daha qısa cümlələr istifadə edə bilərsiniz. Məsələn, "It is difficult to use a computer in poor lighting or without electricity. Also, a slow internet connection can make it hard to work efficiently."

例: It is difficult for me to use a computer when there is poor lighting or no electricity. For example, working outdoors at night without enough light makes it hard to see the screen. Also, a slow or unstable internet connection can prevent me from completing tasks efficiently.

× When I need, I use a computer, especially on my lessons with the primary, second primary students because they like you, they like using and working with the technology.

✓ When I need to, I use a computer, especially in my lessons with primary and secondary students because they like using and working with technology.

The phrase 'When I need' is incomplete and should be 'When I need to' to indicate the action of using a computer. Also, 'on my lessons' should be 'in my lessons' as the correct preposition for activities. 'Primary, second primary students' is corrected to 'primary and secondary students' for clarity and correctness. 'They like you' is incorrect and removed as it does not fit the context. 'The technology' is corrected to 'technology' as a general concept does not require the definite article.

× We know that now, nowadays children has interest for technology, that's why they learn more.

✓ We know that nowadays children have an interest in technology; that's why they learn more.

The subject 'children' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'interest for technology' should be 'interest in technology' as the correct preposition is 'in'. The sentence is also improved for clarity and punctuation.

× Actually, I had a computer from my childhood, but I don't use a lot and for the educational topic.

✓ Actually, I have had a computer since my childhood, but I didn't use it much and not for educational purposes.

The present perfect tense 'have had' is more appropriate to indicate possession from childhood to now. 'Don't use a lot' is corrected to 'didn't use it much' to match past context. 'For the educational topic' is corrected to 'for educational purposes' for natural expression.

× But when I got the university, I started using computers more because we need to prepare presentations for university lessons.

✓ But when I entered university, I started using computers more because we needed to prepare presentations for university lessons.

'Got the university' is incorrect; 'entered university' or 'started university' is correct. The verb 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past context.

× I think that computer also plays an important role in our life because it makes me in our educational for our educational purpose.

✓ I think that computers also play an important role in our lives because they help us with our educational purposes.

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Computer' should be plural 'computers' to generalize. 'Makes me in our educational' is incorrect and replaced with 'help us with our educational purposes' for clarity and correctness. 'Life' is pluralized to 'lives' to refer to people in general.

× Without computer we cannot easily do it.

✓ Without a computer, we cannot easily do it.

The sentence lacks the indefinite article 'a' before 'computer'. The article is necessary when referring to a singular countable noun for the first time.

× Maybe we can use OK on telephone or other technology, but computer has a big role.

✓ Maybe we can use a phone or other technology, but the computer has a big role.

'Use OK on telephone' is incorrect. 'Use a phone' is the correct expression. Also, 'computer' should have the definite article 'the' when referring to it generally in this context.