Computers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议学习如何用完整句子表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I use a computer mainly for work, such as creating documents with MS Office. Additionally, I search for information on websites that are not accessible to companies.

提案: 语法错误明显，表达不清晰。建议练习正确的时态和句子结构，并详细说明第一次使用电脑的经历。

例: I first used a computer when I was about seven or eight years old. My sister taught me and my brother how to play games like Kaiji and perform basic operations.

提案: 表达不够自然，时态使用错误。建议使用现在时态描述假设情况，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: I think my life would be very difficult without a computer because I rely on it for my business and also enjoy playing games.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误严重。建议明确说明具体困难，并用完整句子表达。

例: It would be difficult for me to use a computer if I had to perform tasks that I am not skilled at, such as advanced programming or graphic design.

× What I need to work with Ms. Office to?

✓ What do I need to work with Ms. Office for?

句子缺少助动词“do”，且介词“to”用法错误，应改为“for”。建议在疑问句中使用助动词，且介词搭配要正确。

× Do some documents and search for some answers at some website that firms can't open it.

✓ Do some documents and search for some answers on some websites that firms can't open.

“website”应为复数形式“websites”，且介词应为“on”而非“at”。此外，句尾“it”多余，应删除。

× My sister teached me and my brother how to use a computer for.

✓ My sister taught me and my brother how to use a computer.

“teached”是错误的过去式，正确形式是“taught”。此外，句尾“for”多余，应删除。

× Kaiji and some essential operation.

✓ Kaiji and some essential operations.

“operation”应为复数形式“operations”，且句子缺少连接词，建议补充或重组句子使其完整。

× I think it was darkness because I completely obsessed with computer, not only the tools I work for my business but also some games I liked.

✓ I think it would be dark because I am completely obsessed with computers, not only the tools I work with for my business but also some games I like.

时态不一致，描述假设情况应使用“would be”，“obsessed”后应加介词“with”，且“computer”应为复数“computers”。

× not only the tools I work for my business but also some games I liked.

✓ not only the tools I work with for my business but also some games I like.

“work for”应改为“work with”，且“liked”应改为现在时“like”，保持时态一致。

× I think. Some person things I do not good at on this, so it will be difficult for me to use a computer.

✓ I think there are some things I am not good at, so it will be difficult for me to use a computer.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且“person things”表达错误，应改为“things”。建议重组句子使其通顺。