Art— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I don't like drawing because I never learned how to do it properly. Instead, I prefer listening to music in my free time because it helps me relax.

提案: 回答较为口语化，使用了非正式表达如 'you know'，且句子结构较复杂。建议使用更正式的表达，简洁明了地回答问题。

例: No, I don't enjoy going to galleries because I'm not very interested in exhibitions. Instead, I prefer going to bars to drink and chat with my friends, which helps me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在重复使用 'just want to' 的问题，且部分表达不够流畅。建议丰富词汇，避免重复，提升表达自然度。

例: Yes, even though I don't visit exhibitions often, I'm eager to learn more about art. For instance, I want to understand the meanings behind famous paintings and explore the ideas of renowned artists.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法不准确的问题，且表达略显口语化。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I learned drawing when I was a child. We had drawing classes at school every Thursday where I learned basic techniques. However, I don't consider myself talented, so I rarely draw now.

× I don't like drawing because I didn't learn how to draw, so I find drawing to be very boring and comparing with the drawing.

✓ I don't like drawing because I didn't learn how to draw, so I find drawing very boring compared with drawing.

句中使用了不正确的比较结构“and comparing with the drawing”，应使用“compared with drawing”来表达比较关系。比较级结构应为“compared with + 名词”，而不是“and comparing with”。

× I prefer to listen to music in my spare time.

✓ I prefer listening to music in my spare time.

动词prefer后面通常接动名词形式，表示习惯性动作，故应使用“prefer listening”而非“prefer to listen”。

× Actually I don't like to go to the gallery 'cause I'm not very keen on the exhibitions and I prefer to, you know, go some bars to drink and to talk with my friends and in that case I always feel more relaxed.

✓ Actually I don't like to go to the gallery 'cause I'm not very keen on the exhibitions and I prefer to, you know, go to some bars to drink and talk with my friends and in that case I always feel more relaxed.

动词go后面表示地点时应加介词to，故应为“go to some bars”。另外，“to drink and to talk”中第二个“to”可省略，保持平行结构。

× I just want to appreciate the the meaning of the famous paintings.

✓ I just want to appreciate the meaning of the famous paintings.

句中“the the”重复，应删除一个“the”。

× I remember there was some there were some drawing classes in our school on Thursdays.

✓ I remember there were some drawing classes in our school on Thursdays.

句中“there was some there were some”重复，应删除“there was some”，保持句子简洁正确。

× So I did learn the basic techniques about how to draw.

✓ So I did learn the basic techniques of how to draw.

“techniques”后应接介词“of”表示“关于……的技巧”，而非“about”。