Art— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“have no talent on it”应为“have no talent for it”，“hardly to draw”应为“hardly draw”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复和冗长。

例: No, I don't like drawing because I don't have much talent for it. For example, I find it very difficult to draw even simple things like flowers, so I rarely try to draw pictures.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，且有语法错误，如“I'm bad for drawing”应为“I'm bad at drawing”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

例: Yes, although I'm not good at drawing myself, I enjoy visiting galleries. I especially like landscape paintings because they are beautiful and give me a fresh perspective on the world.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“learn more about art requires talent”应为“learning more about art requires talent”，“talent on this”应为“talent for this”。建议简化句子结构，表达更自然。

例: No, I don't want to learn more about art because I believe it requires talent, which I don't have. I prefer to just appreciate art instead of creating it.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“1 was”应为“I was”，“talent on date”不明确，且“she folded”用词错误。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达回忆。

例: I remember when I was about 5 or 6 years old, my mother sent me to a painting school to see if I had any talent. However, she soon realized that I wasn't very good at drawing.

× No, I don't like it because I have no talent on it.

✓ No, I don't like it because I have no talent in it.

介词使用错误，英语中表示某方面的才能通常用介词'in'，而不是'on'。应使用'have no talent in it'。

× To be honest, drawing a flower it is very difficult to me, so I hardly to draw a picture.

✓ To be honest, drawing a flower is very difficult for me, so I hardly draw a picture.

句子结构混乱，'drawing a flower it is'中多余的'it'应去掉；'difficult to me'应改为'difficult for me'；'hardly to draw'错误，'hardly'后接动词原形，且此处应为'hardly draw'。

× Yes, an adult, I'm bad for drawing.

✓ Yes, as an adult, I'm bad at drawing.

缺少介词'as'引导状语，且'bad for drawing'应为'bad at drawing'，表示擅长或不擅长某事用'at'。

× I think learn more about art requires talent.

✓ I think learning more about art requires talent.

动词'learn'应使用动名词形式'learning'作主语；'requires talent'正确。

× However, I don't have talent on this.

✓ However, I don't have talent in this.

同前，表示某方面的才能用介词'in'，不是'on'。

× I prefer to appreciate art rather than painting.

✓ I prefer to appreciate art rather than paint.

'rather than'后面应接动词原形，表示比较两个动作，故'painting'应改为'paint'。

× It is nice to remember 1 was 5 or 6 years old.

✓ It is nice to remember when I was 5 or 6 years old.

句子缺少连接词'when'引导时间状语从句，且数字'1'应为人称代词'I'。

× She she tried to find my talent on date but absolutely she folded.

✓ She tried to find my talent at that time but she absolutely failed.

重复使用'she'错误；'on date'应为'at that time'或类似表达；'folded'用错，正确词为'failed'表示失败。