Art— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like drawing?
受験者
Yes, I like drawing also I'm not very good at it, but I think, uh, drawing can bring happiness to me and can improve my creative skills and flexible skills. And I think in the future I want to learn more at, at art.
試験官
Do you like to go to the gallery?
受験者
Yes, I really like to go to the gallery and uh, I go to gallery once a week and when I, when I am in the gallery to see the lot of pictures, I'm very, it's very Zen to stay here and to know others ideas, others feeling and it's very happy and very relaxing to be here.
試験官
Do you want to learn more about art?
受験者
Uh, yes, but maybe in the future, because now I didn't, didn't have a lot of time to, uh, learn about art, but in the future, I think I, I must, will be, uh, learn the art lessons to improve my art skills.
試験官
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
受験者
Well, no, because when I am kid, my parents tell me I'm a girl so I need to play the piano and dancing is very good for me. So I'm I never learn about arts or drawing when I am kids. So I like drawing. That's on the junior high school. We have the art class and that time I think, wow, joining us very good and I like drawing and.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like drawing?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇，如将“flexible skills”改为“flexibility skills”。
例: Yes, I like drawing, although I'm not very good at it. I find it brings me happiness and helps improve my creativity and flexibility. In the future, I hope to learn more about art.
Do you like to go to the gallery?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议使用连贯的句子，注意冠词使用，并用更准确的词汇表达感受。
例: Yes, I really enjoy going to galleries. I usually visit one once a week. When I see many paintings there, I feel very calm and relaxed. It helps me understand other people's ideas and emotions.
Do you want to learn more about art?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和句型。
例: Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I don't have much time now. In the future, I plan to take art lessons to improve my skills.
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，注意时态一致，避免重复，并清晰表达观点。
例: No, I didn't learn drawing when I was a kid because my parents encouraged me to play piano and dance. I started liking drawing in junior high school when we had art classes.
文法
× I go to gallery once a week
✓ I go to the gallery once a week
这里缺少冠词“the”，因为“gallery”是特指的场所，应该用定冠词。
× when I am kids
✓ when I was a kid
“kids”是复数，前面用的是单数时间状语，应该用单数形式“kid”，且时态应为过去时“was”。
× when I am kid, my parents tell me
✓ when I was a kid, my parents told me
描述过去的事情，时态应使用过去时，动词“am”改为“was”，“tell”改为“told”。
× I never learn about arts or drawing when I am kids
✓ I never learned about arts or drawing when I was a kid
描述过去的经历，动词应使用过去时“learned”，且“am”应改为“was”，单复数应一致。
× others ideas, others feeling
✓ others' ideas, others' feelings
表示“别人的想法和感受”，应使用所有格形式“others'”，且“feeling”应为复数“feelings”。
× I want to learn more at, at art
✓ I want to learn more about art
动词“learn”后面应接介词“about”表示“关于”，而不是“at”。
× I'm I never learn about arts or drawing
✓ I never learned about arts or drawing
句中多余的“I”，应删除，且动词时态应为过去时“learned”。
× it's very Zen to stay here
✓ it's very peaceful to stay here
“Zen”作为名词或形容词用法不当，建议用“peaceful”表达“宁静”的意思，更符合语境。
× to know others ideas, others feeling
✓ to know others' ideas and feelings
“others”作为所有格时应加撇号，且“ideas”和“feelings”应并列连接。
× and that time I think, wow, joining us very good and I like drawing and.
✓ and at that time I thought, wow, joining was very good and I liked drawing.
时态应为过去时，“think”改为“thought”，“joining us very good”表达不清，改为“joining was very good”，句尾“and”多余应去掉。
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