Art— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短，表达较为抽象，建议增加具体细节，说明为什么喜欢绘画，以及绘画如何帮助表达思想。

例: Yes, I enjoy drawing quite a lot because it allows me to express my emotions and ideas visually. For instance, when I feel happy or inspired, I like to sketch scenes from nature or people around me to capture those moments.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但连接词使用较少，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时可以增加个人感受或具体细节。

例: Yes, I like going to galleries because they help me improve my artistic literacy. For example, I visited a gallery in June where I appreciated paintings by Van Gogh and Renoir, which inspired me to learn more about impressionist art.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子结构较简单，建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I want to learn more about art because, although I am majoring in Chinese language and literature, I believe that literature is a form of art. Therefore, by understanding visual arts better, I can enhance my creative writing skills.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子之间缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时可以增加对绘画经历的感受描述。

例: Yes, I learned to draw in kindergarten, where I practiced with oils, watercolors, crayons, and sketches. I still keep those works as souvenirs, which remind me of my early passion for art.