Art— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือสับสน เช่น คำว่า "Listen" ที่ไม่จำเป็น และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่าย

例: No, I don't like drawing. When I was in middle school, I often felt frustrated because I didn't know what to draw for assignments, which made me upset.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น การเชื่อมประโยคด้วยคำว่า "because" หรือ "so" และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมกับบริบท เช่น "bored" แทน "boring" และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่จำเป็นหรือผิดไวยากรณ์

例: No, I don't like going to galleries. I once visited one near MBK Center in Bangkok with my friends, but I felt bored and sleepy, so I realized that art is not really my interest.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น "because" และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น "drawing" แทน "to drawing" และอธิบายเหตุผลหรือความรู้สึกอย่างชัดเจน

例: Yes, I do want to learn more about art because I think it can be fun to draw anything I see, and it helps me create beautiful pictures with colors.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจน เช่น "interested" แทน "intuited" และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น "because"

例: No, I didn't learn drawing when I was a kid because no one in my family was interested in art, so they didn't encourage me to study it.

× No I don't when I was in their middle school.

✓ No, I didn't when I was in their middle school.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in their middle school'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Don't' is present tense; it should be 'didn't' to match the past context.

× No I don't when I was in their middle school.

✓ No, I didn't when I was in their middle school.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used to refer to 'my' middle school. It should be 'my' to correctly indicate possession.

× I have to taken.

✓ I had to take.

The phrase 'have to taken' is incorrect. 'Have to' is followed by the base form of the verb, so it should be 'had to take' to indicate past obligation.

× Listen.

✓ Listen.

This is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. However, since it may be an interjection or command, it can be left as is.

× And if you give us an assignment.

✓ And if you give us an assignment,

This is a dependent clause and should be connected to the main clause to form a complete sentence.

× What I remember is I was crying because I don't know what I have to draw.

✓ What I remember is I was crying because I didn't know what I had to draw.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in past tense: 'don't know' to 'didn't know' and 'have to draw' to 'had to draw'.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

This sentence is correct as it expresses a present preference.

× I never go to the gallery once time with my friends is what in Bangkok near the MBK center.

✓ I never went to the gallery once with my friends in Bangkok near the MBK center.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time reference. Also, 'once time' is redundant; 'once' suffices. 'Is what' is incorrect and should be removed.

× When I walked in there, I feel boring, Ann.

✓ When I walked in there, I felt bored and sleepy.

The verb 'feel' should be past tense 'felt' to match 'walked'. 'Boring' is an adjective describing something that causes boredom; the correct adjective for a feeling is 'bored'. 'Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is replaced with 'and'.

× Sleepy.

✓ I felt sleepy.

'Sleepy' alone is a fragment; it needs a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× So. That made me know that I'm not integrated in the art.

✓ So, that made me realize that I'm not interested in art.

The phrase 'made me know' is unnatural; 'made me realize' is more appropriate. 'Integrated in the art' is incorrect; likely intended meaning is 'interested in art'.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

This sentence is correct as a response to a present tense question.

× I think if I have a shared.

✓ I think if I have a chance,

'Shared' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'chance' or 'opportunity'.

× I will go to study more or less and because sometimes I think it's fun to drawing anything by seeing to.

✓ I will go to study more or less because sometimes I think it's fun to draw anything by looking at it.

'To drawing' is incorrect; after 'to' the base verb 'draw' should be used. 'By seeing to' is incorrect; 'by looking at it' is appropriate.

× Makes the color. Anne. Have a beautiful pictures.

✓ Make the colors and have beautiful pictures.

'Makes the color' should be 'make the colors' to agree with plural subject. 'Anne' is likely a mishearing of 'and'. 'Have a beautiful pictures' is incorrect; 'pictures' is plural, so 'a' should be removed.

× No, I didn't learn drawing when I was a kid.

✓ No, I didn't learn drawing when I was a kid.

This sentence is correct.

× It because my family they had no one intuited in art so they didn't know much about our so they didn't send me to the adolescent an that's why.

✓ It's because my family had no one interested in art, so they didn't know much about art and didn't send me to art classes, and that's why.

'It because' should be 'It's because'. 'They had no one intuited' is incorrect; 'interested' is correct. 'Our' should be 'art'. 'Adolescent an' is unclear; likely 'art classes' or 'lessons' is intended.

× It be a one listen with.

✓ It was a lesson.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended meaning is 'It was a lesson'.