Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用词和语法需改进，注意时态和动词形式；回答应更简洁并使用连接词使句子流畅。可以先给直接回答（主题句），然后用1–2个具体理由支持，并用连接词如“because”或“so”连接句子。避免重复信息。

例: Yes. I often look at myself in the mirror every morning because I need to check my hairstyle and wash my face. Also, I use it to brush my teeth before leaving the house.

提案: 存在词汇和语法错误（brought/bought，tense），句子有冗余且表达不够具体。应先简短回答是否买过，然后用一两个具体细节说明什么时候、哪种镜子、为什么喜欢，使用连接词如“because”或“so”衔接。

例: Yes, I bought a mirror last year at a supermarket. It had a decorative frame that matched my room’s decor, so I liked it a lot.

提案: 句子结构混乱且存在大量语法错误与不完整表达。先直接回答（e.g. "No, I rarely do"），再给清晰原因并尽量用完整句子和正确词形（convenient/inconvenient）。避免不完整句和模糊表达。

例: No, I rarely carry a mirror with me except for important meetings, because portable mirrors are inconvenient to carry and take up space in my bag.

提案: 表达重复且有语法错误（make→makes, more bigger→bigger, visibility effect→reflective effect or sense of space）。应先直接回答，再用一到两个清楚的理由并用连词连接，避免重复相同意思。

例: Yes, I use mirrors in my room because they make the space look bigger and reflect more light, which brightens the room.

× Yes, I always looking at myself in the mirror.

✓ Yes, I always look at myself in the mirror.

句子中使用了情态／习惯性动作的副词“always”，动词应使用一般现在时的原形“look”，而不是动名词“looking”。建议把动词改为原形以符合一般现在时的习惯表达。

× That is because I need to use a mirror, check on my hairstyle and brush my teeth and wash my face.

✓ That is because I need to use a mirror to check my hairstyle, brush my teeth and wash my face.

“check on my hairstyle”中的“on”多余，正确搭配是“check my hairstyle”。此外，应使用不定式“to check”来连接目的结构，使句子更流畅。建议去掉多余介词并用不定式表目的。

× So I think mirror is important.

✓ So I think the mirror is important.

“mirror”在此處指特定事物，且與動詞“is”配合時需要定冠詞“the”。缺少冠詞屬於主謂一致/名詞短語搭配問題。建议在可指代的名词前加适当的冠词。

× Yes, I brought a mirror.

✓ Yes, I bought a mirror.

學生使用了“brought”（表示“带来”）而意圖表達“购买”時應使用“bought”（buy 的過去式）。這是過去時動詞選用錯誤。建議使用正確的過去式動詞。

× I went to the supermarket to bought the mirror.

✓ I went to the supermarket to buy the mirror.

在不定式結構中動詞應使用原形，不能使用過去式“bought”。因此應改為不定式“to buy”。建議在“to”後使用動詞原形。

× The mirror had a special decoration and its decoration is our decor design.

✓ The mirror had a special decoration and its design matched our decor.

原句“its decoration is our decor design”結構冗長且用詞重複，“decor”和“decoration”重複表達。建議改用“design matched our decor”更簡潔且語法正確。

× To be honest, I seldom take a mirror with me unless I have a meeting I need to check on my hairstyle.

✓ To be honest, I seldom take a mirror with me unless I have a meeting and need to check my hairstyle.

從句中“check on my hairstyle”中的“on”多餘，且缺少連接詞使語序不自然。建議去掉“on”並加上連接詞“and”或重構為“unless I need to check my hairstyle for a meeting”。

× That is because I think take a mirror with me is really unconvenience because it have a white so I'll.

✓ That is because I think taking a mirror with me is really inconvenient because it takes up space.

句中有多處詞類和拼寫錯誤：應用動名詞“taking”作為主語，形容詞“inconvenient”而不是“unconvenience”。“it have a white so I'll”無意義，推測想表達“it takes up space”。建議使用清晰的動名詞結構和正確形容詞，並用“takes up space”表達佔地方。

× Yes, I always use the mirror to decorate my room.

✓ Yes, I always use mirrors to decorate my room.

若指一般習慣性行為，用複數“mirrors”或不加定冠詞更自然；原句使用“the mirror”會暗示特定一面鏡子。建議根據語境使用複數以表泛指。

× That is because mirror make my room look more bigger.

✓ That is because mirrors make my room look bigger.

“make”主語為複數時應用“make”而不是“make”已對，關鍵問題是“more bigger”是冗餘比較級，“bigger”已為比較級，不應加“more”。建議使用單一比較形式“bigger”。

× That is because mirror have a visibility effect.

✓ That is because mirrors have a visibility effect.

“mirror”為主語時與動詞“have”不一致：單數應用“has”，複數用“have”。此處語境更適合泛指鏡子，改用複數“mirrors have”。建議確定主語單複數並使動詞一致。

× So I think mirror is a great decoration.

✓ So I think mirrors are a great decoration.

“mirror”與連繫動詞“is”不一致，若泛指應使用複數“mirrors are”。也可改為“The mirror is a great decoration.”若指特定鏡子。建議根據語境選擇單數加定冠詞或複數形式以保持主謂一致。