Teamwork— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免口语填充词如“uh”，并且注意语法和表达的准确性。例如，“work will be more efficient seat”表达不清，应改为“work will be more efficient”。建议回答时简洁明了，避免重复。

例: Yes, I definitely like teamwork because working together makes tasks more efficient and helps us finish jobs faster.

提案: 回答中有较多口语填充词，影响流畅度。建议使用完整句子并补充具体细节，使回答更丰富和连贯。

例: Yes, in my previous job, I often teamed up with my supervisors, especially when handling design inquiries from the international sales and marketing department.

提案: 注意单词拼写和语法，如“patient”应为“patience”，并且句子结构需更清晰。建议用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: From working in a team, I have learned patience and the importance of listening to others' advice so that we can communicate and discuss effectively.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“just want”应为“just wants”，句子结构需调整。建议简洁表达并使用连接词。

例: I dislike team members who only want to show off their own abilities and do not cooperate well with others.

× I am keen on teamwork because if we can work together in a team and uh, work will be more efficient seat and then we can finish this job quickly.

✓ I am keen on teamwork because if we can work together in a team, the work will be more efficient and then we can finish this job quickly.

句中“work will be more efficient seat”中的“seat”是多余且错误的，应删除。此处没有动词-ing形式错误，但句子结构需要调整以符合语法规范。

× I often team up with my supervisors, uh, for example, umm, if there was a design inquiry from the sales in the international marketing.

✓ I often team up with my supervisors, uh, for example, umm, if there was a design inquiry from sales in international marketing.

“the sales”中的“sales”不需要加定冠词“the”，且“sales”在此处作为不可数名词使用，表示销售部门或销售活动。

× Well, I think the first thing I can learn from the teamwork is the patient.

✓ Well, I think the first thing I can learn from teamwork is patience.

“patient”是形容词，表示“有耐心的”，而此处需要名词“patience”表示“耐心”。

× Yeah, I have got the patient and to listen others advice and then we can communicate and even discuss.

✓ Yeah, I have got patience and listen to others' advice and then we can communicate and even discuss.

“to listen others advice”中“listen”后应加介词“to”，且“others advice”应为“others' advice”，表示“别人的建议”。

× Mel, I'm not keen on that person who is just want to show his own ability and he doesn't know how to cooperate with other team members.

✓ Well, I'm not keen on that person who just wants to show his own ability and doesn't know how to cooperate with other team members.

“that person who is just want”中“is”多余，应去掉；“want”应改为第三人称单数“wants”，以符合主谓一致。

× So this is a kind of a person is I don't like.

✓ So this kind of person is someone I don't like.

“a kind of a person”表达不自然，应改为“this kind of person”；“is I don't like”结构错误，应改为“is someone I don't like”以使句子通顺。