Teamwork— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như thiếu 's' ở động từ 'help' khi chủ ngữ là 'teamwork'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy teamwork because it allows me to meet new people and learn from their experiences. It also helps us share knowledge and ideas effectively.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như 'have many teamwork'. Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have worked in teams many times at school because my teachers often assign group projects. This helps me collaborate and understand different perspectives.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'working in the team that you can'. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

例: When working in a team, I can ask my friends questions and they explain things I don't understand. Since everyone has different knowledge, we can share and learn from each other.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi về trật tự từ và chia động từ. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I dislike teamwork when people do not communicate well. It becomes difficult to share ideas, and this can make me feel frustrated.

× Of course that I like teamwork because teamwork help us meet each other people and connect with them about what you want to learn, what you want to talk about.

✓ Of course that I like teamwork because teamwork helps us meet other people and connect with them about what you want to learn, what you want to talk about.

The subject 'teamwork' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number. Also, 'each other people' is incorrect; it should be 'other people'.

× Of course that I like teamwork because teamwork help us meet each other people and connect with them about what you want to learn, what you want to talk about.

✓ Of course that I like teamwork because teamwork helps us meet other people and connect with them about what you want to learn, what you want to talk about.

The phrase 'meet each other people' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'other people' without 'each other'. 'Each other' is used for reciprocal actions, not to describe people in this context.

× And we can also find many knowledge that we don't know about other people.

✓ And we can also find much knowledge that we don't know about other people.

'Knowledge' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'much'.

× Yes, of course, because I'm just a student so that I need to have many teamwork from my teacher.

✓ Yes, of course, because I'm just a student so I need to have much teamwork from my teacher.

'Teamwork' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'much'. Also, 'so that' is unnecessary here and can be replaced with 'so'.

× That's why I need to meet other people and connect with them a lot so that we can find what is going on.

✓ That's why I need to meet other people and connect with them a lot so that we can find out what is going on.

'Find' is usually followed by an object; to express discovering information, the phrase 'find out' is appropriate here.

× Well, working in the team that you can ask your friends many different question and they can explain for you, uh, what you don't know or you don't understand.

✓ Well, when working in a team, you can ask your friends many different questions and they can explain to you what you don't know or don't understand.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and article usage. 'Working in the team that' is incorrect; it should be 'when working in a team'. 'Question' should be plural 'questions'. 'Explain for you' should be 'explain to you'. Also, 'uh' is a filler and can be omitted.

× Well, working in the team that you can ask your friends many different question and they can explain for you, uh, what you don't know or you don't understand.

✓ Well, when working in a team, you can ask your friends many different questions and they can explain to you what you don't know or don't understand.

'Question' should be plural 'questions' because it is preceded by 'many different', which requires a plural noun.

× Of course, that's the knowledge about each other are different.

✓ Of course, that's because the knowledge about each other is different.

The sentence is missing a conjunction 'because' to connect the ideas properly. Also, 'knowledge' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'.

× Of course, that's the knowledge about each other are different.

✓ Of course, that's because the knowledge about each other is different.

'Knowledge' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.

× So we can share with other people about that.

✓ So we can share that with other people.

'Share' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'about'. The correct structure is 'share something with someone'.

× Maybe that if you cannot connect with each other people, it's really hard for you to say something because they don't want you to talk with them.

✓ Maybe that if you cannot connect with other people, it's really hard for you to say something because they don't want you to talk with them.

'Each other people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'other people'. 'Each other' is used for reciprocal actions, not to describe people in this context.

× They will avoid that you then you will so upset about that problem.

✓ They will avoid you, and then you will be very upset about that problem.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verbs. 'Avoid that you' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid you'. Also, 'you will so upset' should be 'you will be very upset'. The sentence needs to be split with a conjunction 'and' for clarity.