Teamwork— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“collaboration experience”应为“collaborative experiences”。句子结构应更完整，避免断句。

例: Yes, I enjoy teamwork because during my college years, I participated in many group projects. These collaborative experiences helped me improve my communication skills significantly.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“students project”应为“student projects”，“more efficiency”应为“more efficient”。建议使用连贯的句子并避免重复。

例: Yes, I have teamed up with others many times for school projects. Working with others taught me how to communicate more efficiently and learn from different perspectives.

提案: 回答较好，但表达不够自然，如“one man saying”应为“main thing”。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: The main thing I have learned from teamwork is communication, as you need to interact with people of different personalities. Moreover, listening to others' advice is equally important to improve collaboration.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“man saying”应为“main thing”，“don't”应为“doesn't”。建议表达更清晰，避免重复并使用连接词。

例: The main thing I dislike about teamwork is communication problems. For instance, sometimes I work with someone who is selfish and doesn't listen to others, which makes collaboration difficult to continue.

× Through those collaboration experience, I have learned a lot of skills on communication.

✓ Through those collaboration experiences, I have learned a lot of skills on communication.

“experience”应为复数形式“experiences”，因为前面有“those”，表示多个合作经历。

× I have learned a lot of skills on communication.

✓ I have learned a lot of skills in communication.

介词应为“in”，表示在某个领域学到技能，而不是“on”。

× I have a lot of school projects and students project.

✓ I have a lot of school projects and student projects.

“students project”应为复数“student projects”，表示多个学生项目。

× We have to learn how to be more efficiency in communication and also work with other is a good chance to learn from others.

✓ We have to learn how to be more efficient in communication and also working with others is a good chance to learn from others.

“efficiency”是名词，应使用形容词“efficient”；“other”应为复数“others”；“work”应改为动名词“working”以作主语。

× We have to learn how to be more efficiency in communication and also work with other is a good chance to learn from others.

✓ We have to learn how to be more efficient in communication and also working with others is a good chance to learn from others.

同上，形容词和复数形式使用错误。

× I think one man saying I have learned is communication because you have to talk to different personalities of people.

✓ I think one main thing I have learned is communication because you have to talk to different personalities of people.

“man saying”应为“main thing”，表达“主要的事情”。

× It's important to listen to other advice.

✓ It's important to listen to others' advice.

“other advice”应为“others' advice”，表示别人的建议。

× I think the man saying I dislike about collaboration is communication.

✓ I think the main thing I dislike about collaboration is communication.

“man saying”应为“main thing”，表达“主要的事情”。

× sometimes I have to work with somebody who is so selfish and don't listen to others which make your collaboration hard to keep going.

✓ sometimes I have to work with somebody who is so selfish and doesn't listen to others which makes your collaboration hard to keep going.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“doesn't listen”和“makes”。