Teamwork— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีความสับสน ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์เพื่อให้เข้าใจง่ายขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำหรือไม่จำเป็น

例: Yes, I like teamwork because it allows me to collaborate with others and achieve common goals effectively.

提案: ประโยคมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

例: Yes, I have teamed up with others because I work in a large company where cooperation between teams is essential to complete tasks successfully.

提案: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีความหมายคลุมเครือ ควรอธิบายให้ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่อแสดงความเข้าใจในเรื่องที่ถาม

例: From working in a team, I have learned the importance of collaboration and how each member's contribution is vital for success.

提案: คำตอบมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความสมูทของคำตอบ

例: I dislike teamwork when there are too many conflicting ideas and some members act selfishly, which makes cooperation difficult.

× I would say different situation if the work supposed to cooperate with other, so supposed to I like working with teamwork and the other side if I.

✓ I would say in different situations, if the work is supposed to cooperate with others, then I like working in a team, but on the other side, if I...

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and missing prepositions. 'Supposed to' needs to be followed by a verb or be part of a clause. 'Working with teamwork' is incorrect; it should be 'working in a team' or 'working with others.' Also, 'other' should be plural 'others.' The sentence structure is unclear and incomplete, so it needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I have a team up with someone else.

✓ I have teamed up with someone else.

The phrase 'have a team up' is incorrect. The correct present perfect form is 'have teamed up,' which uses the past participle form of the verb 'team up.'

× Because I working in a large company, my work needed to cooperation with other team and to make the work is completely perfect and new.

✓ Because I am working in a large company, my work needs to cooperate with other teams to make the work completely perfect and new.

The verb 'working' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Needed to cooperation' is incorrect; it should be 'needs to cooperate.' 'Other team' should be plural 'other teams.' The phrase 'to make the work is completely perfect and new' is ungrammatical; it should be 'to make the work completely perfect and new.'

× I learn teamwork and the group.

✓ I learn about teamwork and group work.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'about' after 'learn.' Also, 'the group' is vague; 'group work' is more appropriate in this context.

× If someone missing some someone, the world is incomplete and not perfectly sure.

✓ If someone is missing, the world feels incomplete and uncertain.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'If someone missing some someone' is incorrect; it should be 'If someone is missing.' 'Not perfectly sure' is vague; 'uncertain' or 'incomplete' fits better. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× I dislike about teamwork is too many ideas from others and selfish from other and they're not corporate well.

✓ What I dislike about teamwork is that there are too many ideas from others, some selfishness, and they don't cooperate well.

'Dislike about' is incorrect; it should be 'What I dislike about.' 'Selfish from other' is ungrammatical; it should be 'some selfishness.' 'They're not corporate well' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't cooperate well.' The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct preposition use.