Teamwork— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢团队合作的原因，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I like teamwork because it helps me share the workload and learn from others. For example, when we work together, I can gain new ideas and improve my skills.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often team up with others because my studies require teamwork. This way, I can complete assignments more easily and learn from my teammates.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议分句表达，使用连接词，并注意语法准确。

例: I have learned many things, but the most important is how to communicate more efficiently. Also, I can learn different perspectives from my group mates, which helps reduce my stress.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接表达不喜欢的方面，并用具体例子说明。

例: I dislike it when some team members are lazy and do not finish their tasks. This makes me stressed because I have to do their work as well.

× Yes, I like teamwork because it can reduce my personal strength of the work and weekend communication various plans of the work which can widen my knowledge efficiently.

✓ Yes, I like teamwork because it can reduce my personal workload and weekend communication about various work plans, which can widen my knowledge efficiently.

原句中“strength of the work”用词不当，应为“workload”表示工作量；“weekend communication various plans of the work”结构混乱，应改为“weekend communication about various work plans”，使表达更清晰。

× Yes, I usually teamed up with someone because my studies require the teamwork for many times and I can easily finish the study with my team.

✓ Yes, I usually team up with someone because my studies require teamwork many times and I can easily finish the study with my team.

句中“usually teamed up”使用了过去时，但“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“team up”。

× Yes, I usually teamed up with someone because my studies require the teamwork for many times and I can easily finish the study with my team.

✓ Yes, I usually team up with someone because my studies require teamwork many times and I can easily finish the study with my team.

“for many times”用法不正确，应直接用“many times”表示多次。

× I learned many things for the most important one must be communication more efficiently and I can learn from different perspective from my group mates and it helped me reduce individual stress.

✓ I have learned many things; the most important one must be communicating more efficiently. I can learn from different perspectives from my group mates, and it helps me reduce individual stress.

句中“learned”应使用现在完成时“have learned”表示经历；“communication more efficiently”应改为动名词短语“communicating more efficiently”；“perspective”应为复数“perspectives”；“helped”应改为现在时“helps”，保持时态一致。

× I rarely dislike somebody who's lazy to finish his part of teamwork so that I need to help him finish his part for a long time and it makes me more stress and nervous.

✓ I rarely dislike somebody who's lazy to finish their part of the teamwork, but I need to help them finish their part for a long time, and it makes me more stressed and nervous.

“somebody”后应使用“their”作为性别中性代词；“more stress”应为形容词“more stressed”修饰主语。