Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать лишних пауз и использовать правильные формы слов, например, 'a responsible and reliable smart woman' вместо 'women'. Также можно добавить немного деталей, чтобы ответ был более содержательным.

例: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is my Russian teacher at school. She is a responsible, reliable, and very smart woman. I really admire her because she always helps students understand difficult topics clearly.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неестественные выражения. Следует использовать правильные конструкции, например, 'I am still in touch with my primary school teacher' и избегать повторов. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: Yes, fortunately, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. We follow each other on social media and often like each other's posts, which helps us stay connected.

提案: Ответ можно сделать более связным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать связующие слова и правильные времена, например, 'she helped me control myself because I am a very nervous person'. Также стоит добавить конкретные примеры, как она помогла.

例: Well, she helped me control my nerves because I am usually very anxious. She encouraged me by saying that I am a capable person and that I can achieve anything if I put my mind to it.

提案: Ответ содержит повтор и нечеткие выражения, например, 'connected with this fear'. Следует использовать более точные слова и избегать повторов. Также стоит структурировать ответ, используя связующие слова.

例: Honestly, yes. I want to be a teacher in the future because my major is related to education. I hope to become a great, responsible, and reliable teacher who can inspire students.

× She's uh, a responsible and reliable smart women.

✓ She's uh, a responsible and reliable smart woman.

The word 'women' is plural, but it should be singular 'woman' to agree with the singular subject 'She'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I still in touch with my primary school teacher.

✓ I am still in touch with my primary school teacher.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'still in touch'. The phrase requires the verb 'to be' in the correct form. This is a sentence structure and verb usage issue related to prepositions and verb forms.

× we subscribe, uh, on subscribed on each other in social media and we take likes to each other.

✓ we subscribe to each other on social media and like each other's posts.

The verb 'subscribe' should be followed by the preposition 'to'. Also, 'take likes to each other' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'like each other's posts'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and collocations.

× She said that uh, I'm a nice girl and I could do everything if I would like.

✓ She said that uh, I'm a nice girl and I could do everything if I wanted to.

The conditional clause requires past tense 'wanted' instead of 'would like'. Using 'would like' here is incorrect modal verb usage in conditional sentences.

× my major is connected with this fear and I hope that I could be a great teacher, responsible and reliable.

✓ my major is connected with this field and I hope that I can be a great teacher, responsible and reliable.

The word 'fear' is incorrect; it should be 'field'. Also, 'could' is less certain than 'can' when expressing hope for the future. This is an incorrect use of vocabulary and modal verb usage.