Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'which helped me a lot when I'm studying maths'. Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động đã xảy ra và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể.

例: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher was my math teacher because he was very dedicated and patient. He always explained difficult concepts clearly, which helped me improve my skills significantly.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'Uh'. Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

例: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher because I didn't have a phone back then. However, I still keep in contact with my secondary school teacher, who was very supportive.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động đã xảy ra, tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách giúp đỡ.

例: My biology teacher helped me by explaining difficult essays clearly and giving me extra practice exercises, which improved my understanding significantly.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'be come', 'cry good'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng từ phù hợp. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng ý định và lý do cụ thể.

例: When I was young, I wanted to be a literature teacher, but now I plan to become an accountant to follow in my mother's footsteps. Besides, I am good at solving problems.

× My favorite teacher is the teacher who taught me math.

✓ My favorite teacher is the teacher who taught me math.

No correction needed here as the definite article 'the' is correctly used to specify the particular teacher.

× He is a dedicated and determined teacher which helped me a lot when I'm studying maths.

✓ He is a dedicated and determined teacher who helped me a lot when I was studying maths.

Use 'who' instead of 'which' when referring to people. Also, the tense should be past ('was studying') to match the time frame of the help received.

× No, I don't think so. Uh, because when I studied in primary school, I was too young to have my own phones.

✓ No, I don't think so. Uh, because when I studied in primary school, I was too young to have my own phone.

The word 'phones' should be singular 'phone' because typically a person has one phone, and 'own' implies singular possession here.

× However, I'm now I'm keeping in touch with my secondary school.

✓ However, now I'm keeping in touch with my secondary school teacher.

The sentence is awkward and incomplete; it should specify 'secondary school teacher' and remove the repeated 'I'm' for clarity.

× She is really good teacher.

✓ She is a really good teacher.

The indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'really good teacher' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× There are always many way to help me.

✓ There are always many ways to help me.

The plural form 'ways' should be used after 'many' to agree in number.

× However, I still remember that my biology teacher helped me understand a difficult essays he tried.

✓ However, I still remember that my biology teacher helped me understand a difficult essay he tried to explain.

The sentence is confusing and incomplete; 'a difficult essays' is incorrect (singular/plural mismatch), and 'he tried' needs to be connected properly to the verb 'explain'.

× She tried to explain for me and give me some practice that I can improve.

✓ She tried to explain to me and gave me some practice so that I could improve.

The correct preposition is 'explain to me'. Also, verb tense consistency and sentence clarity are improved by changing 'give' to 'gave' and restructuring the sentence.

× When I was young I wanted to be a literature teacher but now I have another plan that I want to be come an accountant so that I can follow in my mother footstep.

✓ When I was young, I wanted to be a literature teacher, but now I have another plan: I want to become an accountant so that I can follow in my mother's footsteps.

'be come' should be 'become' (one word). Also, possessive form 'mother's' and plural 'footsteps' are correct. Added punctuation for clarity.

× Beside that I cry good at solving problem.

✓ Besides that, I am good at solving problems.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'cry' is incorrect and should be 'am'. 'problem' should be plural 'problems'.