Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
受験者
My favorite teacher is not. He's very friendly and always makes the Russians enjoyable.
試験官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
受験者
School teacher No I am not in talk with my school teacher because we have lost contact after I join school.
試験官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
受験者
My favorite teacher helped me by listening partly whenever I had problems and giving me useful advice.
試験官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
受験者
Now I want to be a teacher, I want to be a doctor because I want to help people stay healthy.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
スコア: 40.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.
例: My favourite teacher is Mr. Smith. He is very friendly and always makes the lessons enjoyable by using interesting activities.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
スコア: 35.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher because we lost contact after I moved to a different school.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng từ 'listening partly' không rõ nghĩa và câu hơi ngắn. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
例: My favourite teacher helped me by patiently listening to my problems and giving me useful advice, which made me feel supported and confident.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn gây nhầm lẫn vì bạn nói muốn làm giáo viên nhưng lại muốn làm bác sĩ. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc, giải thích lý do cụ thể cho lựa chọn nghề nghiệp của mình.
例: I don't want to be a teacher in the future. Instead, I want to be a doctor because I want to help people stay healthy and save lives.
文法
× My favorite teacher is not. He's very friendly and always makes the Russians enjoyable.
✓ My favorite teacher is very friendly and always makes the lessons enjoyable.
The original sentence 'My favorite teacher is not.' is incomplete and unclear, causing a sentence structure error (ID 26). The phrase 'makes the Russians enjoyable' is incorrect; likely, the student meant 'makes the lessons enjoyable.' The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence.
× School teacher No I am not in talk with my school teacher because we have lost contact after I join school.
✓ No, I am not in touch with my school teacher because we lost contact after I joined school.
The phrase 'I am not in talk with' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in touch with' (ID 11). Also, 'after I join school' should be in past tense 'after I joined school' to match the past event (ID 5). The correction fixes preposition misuse and tense consistency.
× My favorite teacher helped me by listening partly whenever I had problems and giving me useful advice.
✓ My favorite teacher helped me by listening patiently whenever I had problems and giving me useful advice.
The word 'partly' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'patiently,' which is an adverb describing how the teacher listened (ID 13). The correction replaces the incorrect quantifier with the appropriate adverb.
× Now I want to be a teacher, I want to be a doctor because I want to help people stay healthy.
✓ Now I want to be a doctor because I want to help people stay healthy.
The sentence is contradictory by stating 'I want to be a teacher' and then 'I want to be a doctor.' Also, the question asks about the future, so the student should clearly state their future intention. The correction removes the conflicting statement and clarifies the future aspiration (ID 7).
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