Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In your answer, try to use correct verb tenses and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say "He used better methods and creative ways to teach his students, which helped me enjoy the subject a lot." Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, absolutely. My favorite teacher was my high school chemistry teacher who taught me for three years. He used creative methods to make difficult topics easy to understand, which helped me enjoy the subject a lot.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural by avoiding listing subjects that are not usually taught in primary school, like physics and chemistry. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I am still in touch with some of my primary school teachers, especially my literature teacher. I often contact them when I need advice or guidance related to my work or studies because they have been very helpful and supportive over the years.

提案: Improve your vocabulary and grammar by saying "interactive experiments" instead of "interacting experiment" and "visual aids" instead of "visual ad." Also, use linking words like "for example" to connect ideas.

例: My favorite teacher helped me by making difficult subjects easier to understand, especially complex formulas and scientific phenomena. For example, he used creative and engaging teaching methods such as interactive experiments and visual aids, which made the lessons much more enjoyable and helpful.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more natural by removing unnecessary words like "Future Yes" and improving sentence flow. Also, use plural form "lessons" and correct prepositions.

例: Yes, to be honest, I might consider becoming a teacher in the future. I would like to try teaching for two or three years to see if I enjoy it. If I find it rewarding, I would be happy to continue teaching longer because I want to gain experience in delivering lessons effectively to students.

× He was very creative and already made difficult topic easy to understand.

✓ He was very creative and already made difficult topics easy to understand.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because it refers to multiple difficult subjects, matching the plural context.

× He's used better methods and creative way to take his students which help me enjoy the subjects a lot.

✓ He used better methods and creative ways to teach his students which helped me enjoy the subjects a lot.

The sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect word forms. 'He's used' should be 'He used' for past tense consistency. 'Creative way' should be plural 'creative ways' to match 'methods'. 'To take his students' is incorrect; it should be 'to teach his students'. 'Help' should be 'helped' to agree with past tense.

× I usually contact them when I need some advice or guidance related to my work or study.

✓ I usually contact them when I need some advice or guidance about my work or study.

The preposition 'related to' is correct but 'about' is more natural and commonly used in this context for advice or guidance.

× They are very helpful and supportive over the years.

✓ They have been very helpful and supportive over the years.

The phrase 'over the years' indicates a period continuing to the present, so present perfect tense 'have been' is appropriate instead of simple present 'are'.

× My favorite teacher helped me a lot by making difficult subject easier to understand, especially complex formulas and scientific phenomena.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me a lot by making difficult subjects easier to understand, especially complex formulas and scientific phenomena.

The noun 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match the plural context. Also, 'easier' is correct as a comparative adjective here.

× He used creative and engaging teaching methods such as interacting experiment and visual ad, which made the lesson much more enjoyable and helpful to me.

✓ He used creative and engaging teaching methods such as interactive experiments and visual aids, which made the lesson much more enjoyable and helpful to me.

'Interacting experiment' should be 'interactive experiments' to correctly describe the teaching methods. 'Visual ad' should be 'visual aids' to refer to teaching materials.

× Future Yes, To be honest, I might consider becoming a teacher in the future.

✓ Yes, to be honest, I might consider becoming a teacher in the future.

The word 'Future' at the beginning is misplaced and unnecessary. The sentence should start with 'Yes, to be honest,' for clarity and correct structure.

× I would be happy to continue teaching for a longer period because I want to gain experience in delivering lesson effectively to the students.

✓ I would be happy to continue teaching for a longer period because I want to gain experience in delivering lessons effectively to the students.

The noun 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match the context of multiple lessons. 'Effectively' is correctly used as an adverb modifying 'delivering'.