Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and natural. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repetition. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you liked the teacher with specific details.

例: Yes, I have a favourite teacher from my university days in Tbilisi. He was very professional and knowledgeable, and I always admired how confidently he explained complex topics.

提案: Your answer is heartfelt but could be more structured and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to express your feelings clearly and concisely.

例: Unfortunately, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because he passed away. He was very kind and professional, and I often wish I could talk to him, especially when I need advice.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how the teacher helped you.

例: My favourite teacher helped me become a better person. When I was in first grade, he taught me important values like patience and kindness, which I believe are essential qualities to learn.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

例: No, I do not want to be a teacher because I have already chosen to be an architect, which I am proud of. Moreover, teaching requires many skills that I believe I do not possess.

× Yes, I have favorite teacher.

✓ Yes, I have a favorite teacher.

In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. 'Teacher' is singular and countable, so it needs the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× When I was study at Tbilisi at university, there was lecturer who was very professional and he knew what he was saying and doing and he was.

✓ When I was studying at university in Tbilisi, there was a lecturer who was very professional and he knew what he was saying and doing.

The verb 'study' should be in the past continuous form 'was studying' to indicate an action in progress in the past. Also, 'lecturer' is singular countable and needs the article 'a'. The phrase 'at Tbilisi at university' is better as 'at university in Tbilisi'. The last 'and he was' is incomplete and should be removed.

× When I was study at Tbilisi at university, there was lecturer who was very professional and he knew what he was saying and doing and he was.

✓ When I was studying at university in Tbilisi, there was a lecturer who was very professional and he knew what he was saying and doing.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'Tbilisi'. The correct preposition is 'in' for cities. Also, 'at university' is correct when referring to being a student there.

× there was lecturer who was very professional

✓ there was a lecturer who was very professional

In English, singular countable nouns require an article after 'there is/was'. 'Lecturer' is singular countable, so it needs 'a'.

× I wish he was here and I could talk with him and communicate time to time because sometimes I really need.

✓ I wish he were here and I could talk with him and communicate from time to time because sometimes I really need to.

The subjunctive mood requires 'were' instead of 'was' after 'I wish'. The phrase 'communicate time to time' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate from time to time'. Also, 'I really need' is incomplete and should be followed by an object or infinitive.

× When I was my first grade, he studied me how to be patient, how to be kind and how to be human.

✓ When I was in my first grade, he taught me how to be patient, how to be kind and how to be human.

The phrase 'When I was my first grade' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was in my first grade'. The verb 'studied me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'taught me' when referring to teaching someone.

× I wish he was here and I could talk with him and communicate time to time because sometimes I really need.

✓ I wish he were here and I could talk with him and communicate from time to time because sometimes I really need to.

The phrase 'communicate time to time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'communicate from time to time'.

× some of teacher don't have it.

✓ some teachers don't have it.

The phrase 'some of teacher' is incorrect because 'teacher' is singular. It should be plural 'teachers' without 'of' in this context.