Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "She is very encouraging and always helps me solve problems in biology, which made me really interested in the subject."

例: Yes, my favorite teacher is my biology teacher. She is very encouraging and always helps me solve problems in biology, which made me really interested in the subject.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example: "No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because after I graduated, we all moved on with our lives."

例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because after I graduated, we all moved on with our lives.

提案: Your answer is vague and incomplete. Try to give specific examples and use linking words. For example: "She helped me by teaching patiently and encouraging me. Moreover, she always gave me good feedback, which made me more confident."

例: She helped me by teaching patiently and encouraging me. Moreover, she always gave me good feedback, which made me more confident.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example: "Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because teachers have long vacations, like summer and winter holidays, which I think is great."

例: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because teachers have long vacations, like summer and winter holidays, which I think is great.

× She is very encouraging and always help me solve many problems about biology and I really into biology because of her.

✓ She is very encouraging and always helps me solve many problems about biology and I am really into biology because of her.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'She'. Also, 'I really into biology' is missing the verb 'am' to form the correct present tense 'I am really into biology'.

× To be honest, we don't, I don't keep, I don't keep in touch with my primary teachers because since we went after I graduating, after I graduated, we move on our life.

✓ To be honest, we don't, I don't keep in touch with my primary teachers because after I graduated, we moved on with our lives.

The phrase 'after I graduating' is incorrect; it should be 'after I graduated' using the past tense. Also, 'we move on our life' should be 'we moved on with our lives' to correctly use past tense and the preposition 'with' for the phrase 'move on with'.

× MMM she will. She will teach me with many, encourage and always give me good feedback and make me more confident.

✓ She would teach me a lot, encourage me, always give me good feedback, and make me more confident.

The use of 'will' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to past habitual actions. 'Would' is the correct modal verb to express past habitual actions. Also, 'teach me with many' is unclear and should be 'teach me a lot'.

× Yes I do because I think teacher has many vacation no vacation vacation and they have summer holiday and winter holiday.

✓ Yes, I do because I think teachers have many vacations, including summer and winter holidays.

The noun 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match the general statement. 'Has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'vacation no vacation vacation' is unclear and should be corrected to 'vacations'.

× I worry and they got a great.

✓ I think they have a great time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I worry and they got a great' does not form a proper sentence. It should be restructured to express the intended meaning clearly, such as 'I think they have a great time.'