Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍微丰富内容，增加一些具体描述，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, my favorite teacher is Miss Wang, my primary school English teacher. She was very kind and patient, which made learning English enjoyable for me.

提案: 回答中有些语法错误和表达不够地道，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的连贯性。

例: Yes, I still keep in touch with her. We often share stories about our daily lives, and I find it very comfortable to talk with her.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和口语填充词过多，建议减少语气词，注意动词时态和形式，表达更准确。

例: She helped me improve my spoken English a lot. At that time, I was shy and afraid of making mistakes, but she encouraged me to speak English confidently, which inspired me greatly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，同时可以增加一些理由，使回答更完整。

例: I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I am not very patient, which is essential for teaching. Also, I prefer working independently rather than in a classroom setting.

× she just kept encouraging me, umm, to spoke to speak English confidently.

✓ she just kept encouraging me, umm, to speak English confidently.

这里的动词不定式to后面应该用动词原形speak，而不是过去式spoke。动词不定式结构中，动词应保持原形。

× I also interested in working independently.

✓ I am also interested in working independently.

这里缺少系动词am，导致句子缺少谓语动词。正确表达应该是“I am interested”，表示状态。