Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了对老师的感情，但句子结构有些不自然，且存在语法错误，如“make me feel confident”应为“made me feel confident”。建议使用更自然的时态和表达方式，并避免冗长。

例: Yes, I do. When I was four and in kindergarten, there was a female teacher who was very patient. Although I can't remember exactly what she did, I clearly recall that she always encouraged me and made me feel confident.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm not be in touch”应为“I'm not in touch”，以及“too busy to connected”应为“too busy to connect”。句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，使用正确时态和表达。

例: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher. I think I met her about ten years ago, but now I've been working as a project manager for seven years, so I'm too busy to keep in contact.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如“she was.”后面缺少内容。建议完整表达观点，使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意词汇搭配，如“high expectation”应为“high expectations”。

例: I can't remember exactly what my favorite teacher did, but I clearly remember that she always encouraged me and never gave up on me. Because of her constant support and high expectations, I felt more motivated to face challenges and improve myself.

提案: 回答表达清晰，但存在语法错误，如“the teacher have”应为“teachers have”，以及“with the right way”应为“in the right way”。建议注意主谓一致和介词使用，使表达更准确。

例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future. I'm not a patient person, and teachers have to deal with many children every day. They need a lot of patience to guide them in the right way, so I believe this responsibility would be quite challenging for me.

× she was always encouraging me and make me feel confident.

✓ she was always encouraging me and making me feel confident.

这里两个动词并列，前面是现在分词形式encouraging，后面也应使用现在分词making，保持形式一致。

× No, I'm not be in touch with my primary school teacher,

✓ No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher,

这里使用了错误的动词形式“I'm not be”，正确的表达是“I'm not”，即主语+be动词的正确形式。

× but I thought, I thought I met her ten years ago

✓ but I thought I met her ten years ago

重复使用了“I thought”，应去掉多余的部分，使句子简洁且语法正确。

× so I'm too busy to connected with them.

✓ so I'm too busy to connect with them.

不定式to后应接动词原形，不能用过去分词connected。

× I can't remember the exactly things my favorite teacher did for me,

✓ I can't remember the exact things my favorite teacher did for me,

“exactly”是副词，修饰动词或形容词，修饰名词时应使用形容词“exact”。

× but I clearly remember that she was.

✓ but I clearly remember that she was very supportive.

句子不完整，缺少谓语或补充说明，需补充完整表达。

× Because of her constant support and high expectation,

✓ Because of her constant support and high expectations,

“expectation”应使用复数形式“expectations”，表示多种期望。

× I felt more motivation to face, challenge and improve myself.

✓ I felt more motivated to face, challenge and improve myself.

“motivation”是名词，后面接动词应使用形容词“motivated”来表达感受。

× and the teacher have to deal with many children every day

✓ and the teacher has to deal with many children every day

主语是单数“the teacher”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”。

× and they need a lot of patience to guide them with the right way.

✓ and they need a lot of patience to guide them in the right way.

介词搭配错误，应使用“in the right way”表示“以正确的方式”。