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提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'My favourite teacher was my maths teacher because his teaching style was interesting and made things easy to remember. He was calm and very supportive academically.'

例: My favourite teacher was my maths teacher because his teaching style was interesting and made things easy to remember. He was calm and very supportive academically.

提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words effectively. For example, say 'Unfortunately, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because of my busy life and limited social media use. However, I would love to meet and catch up with them in the future.'

例: Unfortunately, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because of my busy life and limited social media use. However, I would love to meet and catch up with them in the future.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' properly and avoid repetition. For instance, say 'He helped me academically and personally by motivating me during difficult times. For example, when I was confused about my career, he inspired and guided me towards a promising path.'

例: He helped me academically and personally by motivating me during difficult times. For example, when I was confused about my career, he inspired and guided me towards a promising path.

提案: Your answer conveys your opinion but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words like 'also' and 'moreover' appropriately. For example, say 'Definitely, I want to be a teacher because it is a rewarding and respectable profession. Also, teaching helps to continuously enhance our knowledge.'

例: Definitely, I want to be a teacher because it is a rewarding and respectable profession. Also, teaching helps to continuously enhance our knowledge.

× I had a teacher of my maths who is my favorite because the teaching style of his is very interesting and make the things easy to remember.

✓ I had a maths teacher who is my favorite because his teaching style is very interesting and makes things easy to remember.

The phrase 'a teacher of my maths' is incorrect; it should be 'a maths teacher' to correctly describe the subject taught. Also, 'the teaching style of his' is awkward; 'his teaching style' is the correct possessive form. Additionally, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'style'.

× the teaching style of his is very interesting and make the things easy to remember.

✓ his teaching style is very interesting and makes things easy to remember.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'style'. In English, third person singular verbs in present tense end with 's'.

× he is a cool as cucumber and also support in our academic.

✓ he is as cool as a cucumber and also supports us in our academics.

The idiom is 'as cool as a cucumber', so 'a' is needed before 'cool'. Also, 'support in our academic' is incorrect; it should be 'supports us in our academics' to correctly use the verb and noun form. 'Supports' agrees with the singular subject 'he'.

× he is a cool as cucumber and also support in our academic.

✓ he is as cool as a cucumber and also supports us in our academics.

The verb 'support' should be 'supports' to agree with the singular subject 'he' in present tense. Also, 'academic' should be plural 'academics' to refer to studies generally.

× we have not that much time and I am also not that much active on the social media by which I am not connected and we have no connection with each other.

✓ we do not have much time and I am also not very active on social media, so I am not connected and we have no connection with each other.

'Have not that much time' is incorrect; 'do not have much time' is correct. 'That much active' should be 'very active'. 'On the social media' should be 'on social media' as 'social media' is uncountable and does not take 'the'. 'By which' is awkward; 'so' is better to show cause.

× But if I get a chance in the future, I definitely meet them and have a conversation regarding our now life.

✓ But if I get a chance in the future, I will definitely meet them and have a conversation about our current lives.

The verb 'meet' should be in future tense 'will meet' to match the conditional 'if I get a chance'. 'Regarding our now life' is awkward; 'about our current lives' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× he helped me in my academic as well as in my personal life because he motivated me in in my downtime.

✓ he helped me in my academics as well as in my personal life because he motivated me in my downtime.

'Academic' should be plural 'academics' to refer to studies generally. The rest is correct past tense usage.

× when I am confused about my career, he also inspired me and also guided me to my career in which I can achieve good in my future moreover.

✓ when I was confused about my career, he also inspired me and guided me towards a career in which I can achieve well in my future.

The time frame is past, so 'am' should be 'was'. 'Guided me to my career' is awkward; 'guided me towards a career' is better. 'Achieve good' is incorrect; 'achieve well' or 'succeed' is correct.

× if I get a chance and if I would pursue my career in the teaching, it will be a rewarding for me.

✓ if I get a chance and if I pursue my career in teaching, it will be rewarding for me.

In conditional sentences, 'if I would pursue' is incorrect; it should be 'if I pursue'. Also, 'a rewarding' is incorrect; 'rewarding' is an adjective and does not need 'a'.

× Moreover, I feel that teaching is a career where which is more respectable as compared to other profession.

✓ Moreover, I feel that teaching is a career which is more respectable compared to other professions.

'Where which' is redundant; use either 'which' or 'where'. 'Other profession' should be plural 'other professions' to compare generally.

× If I talk about other other aspect of teaching, it also enhance our knowledge more and more.

✓ If I talk about other aspects of teaching, it also enhances our knowledge more and more.

'Other other' is a repetition error; only one 'other' is needed. 'Aspect' should be plural 'aspects' to match 'other'. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'.