Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
受験者
Absolutely. I have a good teacher and it's definitely an English teacher because she's very kind and also she always has a good explanation of a new theme.
試験官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
受験者
Honestly, I study at school now so of course I have a contact of my school teacher and we're still in touch. I always can call her and ask some information about my school routine, school days.
試験官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
受験者
Honestly my favorite teacher always give me a good explanations about new topics so she always helped me about my school problems and help me to get good.
試験官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
受験者
To be honest, I don't think so because I don't have enough confidence to explain new information to the students, so I don't want to be a teacher in the future, especially at school.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Следует избегать повторений и использовать более подходящие слова, например, вместо "a good teacher" лучше сказать "my favourite teacher". Также стоит добавить связующее слово для плавности.
例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher because she is very kind and always explains new topics clearly.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
スコア: 65.0提案: Ответ немного запутан и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для логичности. Например, "I am still in touch with my current school teacher because..."
例: Yes, I am still in touch with my current school teacher because I can always ask her about my school routine and daily activities.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Нужно использовать правильные времена и более конкретные детали. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для связности.
例: My favourite teacher helped me by explaining new topics clearly, which improved my understanding and helped me solve school problems effectively.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
スコア: 75.0提案: Ответ достаточно понятен, но можно сделать его более естественным и связным, используя более разнообразную лексику и связующие слова.
例: To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I lack confidence in explaining new information to students, especially in a school setting.
文法
× Honestly my favorite teacher always give me a good explanations about new topics so she always helped me about my school problems and help me to get good.
✓ Honestly my favorite teacher always gives me good explanations about new topics, so she always helped me with my school problems and helped me to do well.
The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'my favorite teacher'. Also, 'a good explanations' is incorrect because 'explanations' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. The phrase 'help me to get good' is unclear and should be corrected to 'helped me to do well' for clarity and correctness.
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