Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be more natural by adding a brief explanation or example. Try to avoid negative constructions and add a positive detail to make your response more engaging.

例: I don't have a particular favourite teacher, but I appreciated all my teachers because they helped me learn in different ways.

提案: Your answer is quite good with clear reasons and details. To improve, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating similar ideas.

例: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because after finishing school, I went to Russia for further studies. Consequently, I lost contact with them and don't have their phone numbers anymore.

提案: Your answer is very brief and does not provide any supporting details. Even if you don't have a favourite teacher, try to explain why or mention how teachers generally help you to enrich your answer.

例: I didn't have a favourite teacher, but all of them helped me by explaining difficult topics clearly and encouraging me to do my best.

提案: Your answer is detailed and well-structured. To improve further, you could use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and vary your vocabulary slightly.

例: No, I don't want to be a teacher. Instead, I aspire to be a psychologist because I enjoy learning about how the brain functions and how behaviours and emotions influence people. Therefore, I want to deepen my knowledge so that I can help others in the future.

× No, I don't have a particularly favorite teacher.

✓ No, I don't have a particularly favourite teacher.

The adjective 'favorite' should be spelled as 'favourite' in English (India). Also, 'particularly' is correctly used as an adverb modifying 'favourite'. The correction is mainly spelling to match Indian English conventions.

× No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because after completing my school I went to Russia for further studies.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher because after completing my school I went to Russia for further studies.

The question refers to 'your primary school teacher' in singular, so the answer should also refer to a singular 'teacher' to maintain consistency and clarity.

× I want to be a psychologist in the future because I enjoy knowing about the way brain functions and how the behaviours and emotions influence people.

✓ I want to be a psychologist in the future because I enjoy learning about how the brain functions and how behaviours and emotions influence people.

The phrase 'knowing about' is less natural here; 'learning about' is more appropriate. Also, 'the way brain functions' should be 'how the brain functions' for grammatical correctness. 'The behaviours' should be 'behaviours' as a general plural noun without 'the'.