Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 다소 길고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하세요. 예를 들어, 'enjoy English teacher'는 'English teacher I enjoyed'로 수정할 수 있습니다.

例: Yes, I have a favorite teacher from high school. She made learning English enjoyable by using creative methods and showed great passion for the subject. Her supportive attitude motivated me to improve my language skills.

提案: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'reaching it a lasting impression' 대신 'left a lasting impression'를 사용하고, 'communicate the social media'는 'communicate through social media'로 수정하세요.

例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. She was very kind and supportive, and she left a lasting impression on me. We occasionally communicate through social media, and I enjoy hearing about her health and sharing my updates.

提案: 문법과 어휘 사용에 많은 오류가 있습니다. 'strength and weakness for bring'는 'strengths and weaknesses by giving'으로, 'patients'는 문맥상 'physics'나 다른 과목으로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 만드세요.

例: My favorite teacher helped me a lot by giving personalized guidance and encouragement. She understood my strengths and weaknesses and gave constructive feedback, especially in difficult subjects like mathematics. Her clear explanations made complex concepts easier to understand, which greatly improved my skills.

提案: 전반적으로 잘 답변했으나, 좀 더 다양한 어휘와 연결어를 사용해 답변을 풍부하게 만들면 좋겠습니다.

例: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping others learn and grow. Teaching not only allows me to share knowledge but also to make a positive impact on students' lives. For instance, I find it very rewarding when I see students improve and gain confidence through my guidance.

× She was my high school enjoy English teacher who made learning enjoyable and engaging by using creative methods or passion for the subject, and her supportive attitude really motivated me to improve my language skills.

✓ She was my high school English teacher who made learning enjoyable and engaging by using creative methods and passion for the subject, and her supportive attitude really motivated me to improve my language skills.

The phrase 'enjoy English teacher' is incorrect; 'enjoy' is a verb and does not fit here. The correct noun is 'English teacher'. Also, 'or' should be 'and' to correctly connect 'creative methods' and 'passion'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× She was very kind and supportive, reaching it a lasting impression on me.

✓ She was very kind and supportive, leaving a lasting impression on me.

The phrase 'reaching it a lasting impression' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'leaving a lasting impression'. 'Leaving' is the appropriate verb here, and 'on me' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× We occasionally communicate the social media and I always enjoy hearing about her health experiences and sharing my own update.

✓ We occasionally communicate through social media and I always enjoy hearing about her health experiences and sharing my own updates.

The verb 'communicate' requires the preposition 'through' when referring to a medium like social media. Also, 'update' should be plural 'updates' to match the context of sharing information regularly.

× She always took the time to understand my strength and weakness for bring constructive feedback that motivated me to improve, for example, during difficult subjects like mathematics or patients.

✓ She always took the time to understand my strengths and weaknesses to bring constructive feedback that motivated me to improve, for example, during difficult subjects like mathematics or physics.

'Strength' and 'weakness' should be plural 'strengths' and 'weaknesses' to refer to multiple aspects. 'For bring' is incorrect; it should be 'to bring' to indicate purpose. Also, 'patients' is likely a typo for 'physics', a subject.

× And clear explanation made complex concepts much easier to grasp which boost my competence to significant country.

✓ And clear explanations made complex concepts much easier to grasp, which boosted my competence significantly.

'Explanation' should be plural 'explanations' to match the context. 'Boost' should be past tense 'boosted' to agree with 'made'. The phrase 'to significant country' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'significantly' is the correct adverb to modify 'boosted'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which'.