Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and fluent. Avoid unnecessary pauses and incomplete sentences. Try to combine ideas smoothly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my biology professor because he is very helpful and has in-depth knowledge of the subject, so I really respect him.

提案: Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and grammatical errors such as 'visits' instead of 'visit'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I live far from my hometown. However, whenever I visit my home, I make sure to meet them.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar, for example, say 'he gives me suggestions' instead of 'he suggests me'. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

例: He helps me in various ways; for example, he motivates me and gives me suggestions on my weaknesses. Moreover, he helps me understand the nuances of difficult concepts.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more natural by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Also, try to combine sentences for better fluency.

例: Yes, I do want to be a teacher in the future because I love tutoring students and enjoy sharing knowledge by explaining concepts and theories clearly.

× I have lost contact of my primary school teacher.

✓ I have lost contact with my primary school teacher.

The correct preposition to use with 'lose contact' is 'with', not 'of'. So, it should be 'lost contact with'. This is a common prepositional error.

× However, when I visits my home home, I do visit them.

✓ However, when I visit my hometown, I do visit them.

The verb 'visits' is incorrect here because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'visit'. Also, 'home home' is a repetition and should be 'hometown'.

× However, when I visits my home home, I do visit them.

✓ However, when I visit my hometown, I do visit him.

The pronoun 'them' is plural, but the reference is to a singular teacher, so 'him' is correct.

× He helps me in the, uh, various ways.

✓ He helps me in various ways.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'various ways'. Removing it makes the sentence more natural.

× He suggests me on my uh. Weaknesses.

✓ He suggests to me about my weaknesses.

The verb 'suggest' requires a preposition 'to' before the indirect object. Also, 'on' is incorrect here; 'about' is appropriate.