Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复使用“umm”，使语言更流畅自然。同时，回答可以更简洁，突出重点，避免冗余。

例: Yes, my favorite teacher is my current tutor who also teaches fine art and graphic design. She has helped me a lot and is very easy to communicate with. She even assists me in changing my classes when needed.

提案: 回答中应避免口头语“uh”和“umm”，并且表达应更自然流畅。可以使用更具体的词汇描述与老师的联系频率。

例: To be honest, I keep in touch with my primary school teacher only occasionally. I usually send her a message on Teacher's Day, but we don't communicate much at other times.

提案: 回答应更具体，详细说明老师如何帮助你，比如具体的例子或情境。同时减少口头语，使表达更自然。

例: My favorite teacher has helped me in many ways, such as improving my relationships with classmates by encouraging teamwork, and assisting me with my schoolwork by providing extra guidance.

提案: 回答应更清晰，避免重复和口头语。可以具体说明教师职业的挑战，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I don't want to be a teacher in the future because the job is very demanding. Teachers often start work early and finish late, grading homework and projects, which can be quite exhausting.

× she helped me a lot and umm it is really easy to communicate with her and she will always help me to change my class.

✓ she helps me a lot and umm it is really easy to communicate with her and she always helps me to change my class.

这里的时态应该保持一致，描述现在的情况时，动词应使用第三人称单数形式helps和helps，而不是过去式helped和将来时will help。

× I only have a little touch with my primary teacher.

✓ I only have a little contact with my primary teacher.

英语中通常用contact来表示联系，touch通常不与have连用表示联系。应使用contact替换touch。

× every teacher's day I will send message to her, but other times we don't have any communication with each other.

✓ every Teacher's Day I send messages to her, but other times we don't have any communication with each other.

Teacher's Day是专有名词，首字母应大写；send message应为send messages表示多次发送；另外，时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时send。

× my favorite teacher help me in, umm, every ways.

✓ my favorite teacher helps me in, umm, every way.

主语是单数my favorite teacher，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式helps；every ways应为every way，every后面接单数名词。

× my favorite teacher help me in, umm, every ways.

✓ my favorite teacher helps me in, umm, every way.

every后面应接单数名词，不能用复数ways，应改为way。

× Like my relationship between me and my classmates and also umm, she helped me at my work.

✓ Like my relationship with my classmates and also umm, she helped me at my work.

英语中表示人与人之间的关系用relationship with，而不是relationship between me and my classmates。

× she helped me at my work.

✓ she helps me at my work.

根据上下文，描述的是现在的情况，动词应使用一般现在时helps。

× I wouldn't want to be a teacher in the future because umm, I think they are really tired.

✓ I don't want to be a teacher in the future because umm, I think they are really tired.

这里表达的是现在的意愿，使用一般现在时的否定形式don't want更合适，wouldn't want通常用于假设语气。

× Every day we have to get off very early and sleep very late to umm help us change our homework and project and sometimes it is really difficult.

✓ Every day teachers have to get up very early and sleep very late to umm help us check our homework and projects and sometimes it is really difficult.

get off应改为get up表示起床；help us change homework不合适，应为help us check homework；homework和project应为复数projects。