Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
受験者
Yes, umm Miss Wong is my favorite teacher who teaches us documentary creation during my college years. Moreover, she guided me to create outstanding works which won awards.
試験官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
受験者
Sure, thanks to the technology developing, I can still touch with my primary school teachers and we always share our daily life on a message.
試験官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
受験者
Teacher Wang has helped me in many ways, especially in terms of inspiring creativity. She has motivated me to gain a great deal of inspiration.
試験官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
受験者
Umm, to be honest, I don't have a such a career plan. I once tried being a tutor and found that is really a challenging job. Maybe I will consider becoming a teacher after I have sufficient capabilities.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中有停顿词“umm”，影响流畅性。建议减少口语填充词，回答更自然流畅。同时，句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化表达，避免冗余。
例: Yes, Miss Wong was my favorite teacher in college. She taught documentary creation and helped me produce award-winning projects.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“touch with”应为“keep in touch with”，以及“on a message”表达不准确。建议注意固定搭配和介词使用，提升语言准确性。
例: Yes, thanks to developing technology, I can still keep in touch with my primary school teachers, and we often share our daily lives through messages.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容重复，使用了“inspiring creativity”和“gain a great deal of inspiration”两次表达相似意思。建议丰富细节，使用更多具体例子和不同表达。
例: Teacher Wang helped me by encouraging creative thinking. For example, she assigned projects that challenged me to develop original ideas.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中有停顿词“Umm”，影响流畅性。表达中“a such a career plan”不正确，应为“such a career plan”。建议注意语法准确性，减少口语填充词。
例: To be honest, I don't have a clear career plan yet. I tried tutoring before and found it challenging. Maybe I will consider teaching in the future when I am more prepared.
文法
× thanks to the technology developing, I can still touch with my primary school teachers and we always share our daily life on a message.
✓ thanks to the developing technology, I can still keep in touch with my primary school teachers and we always share our daily lives through messages.
这里“technology developing”应改为“developing technology”，因为形容词顺序错误；“touch with”应改为“keep in touch with”，这是固定搭配；“daily life”应为复数形式“daily lives”，因为指多个人的日常生活；“on a message”应改为“through messages”，更符合表达习惯。
× I don't have a such a career plan.
✓ I don't have such a career plan.
“a such a”是错误的用法，正确表达是“such a”，去掉多余的冠词“a”。
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