Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。应直接回答问题并使用完整句子，例如："Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher, Mr. True."

例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher, Mr. True. He always makes lessons interesting and helps me improve my English skills.

提案: 时态使用错误，句子不完整。应使用现在时态并完整表达，例如："Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher."

例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. We often chat online and sometimes meet during holidays.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。应使用正确的时态和句子结构，并具体说明帮助的方式，例如："He helped me by encouraging me and giving me sweets when I did well."

例: He helped me by encouraging me and giving me sweets when I did well. This made me feel motivated and supported in my studies.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误。应使用正确的表达方式并简洁说明原因，例如："Yes, I want to be a teacher because I find it enjoyable and I love teaching children."

例: Yes, I want to be a teacher because I find it enjoyable and I love teaching children. I believe it is a rewarding job that helps shape the future.

× Yes, is my English teacher Mr. True?

✓ Yes, he is my English teacher, Mr. True.

句子缺少主语，且疑问句形式不正确。应使用完整句子表达肯定回答，并正确使用主语和系动词。

× Yes, I did. Still in touch with my primary school teacher.

✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher.

此处回答应使用现在时态，因为“still in touch”表示现在仍然保持联系。原句使用过去时态“did”不合适。

× Still in touch with my primary school teacher.

✓ I am still in touch with my primary school teacher.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× When I greet he, he will give me a chocolate of sweets so I feel he is so nice.

✓ When I greet him, he gives me chocolates, so I feel he is very nice.

“greet”后应使用宾格代词“him”而非主格“he”。另外，“a chocolate of sweets”表达不自然，应改为复数“chocolates”。时态也应保持一致。

× When I greet he, he will give me a chocolate of sweets so I feel he is so nice.

✓ When I greet him, he gives me chocolates, so I feel he is very nice.

原句中“will”用法不当，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时。

× Yes, because I find be a teacher so happy and fun and I love to teach our children so I will be a teacher in the future.

✓ Yes, because I find being a teacher very happy and fun, and I love to teach children, so I will be a teacher in the future.

动词“find”后应接动名词“being”而非不定式“be”。此外，“so happy and fun”表达不自然，应改为“very happy and fun”。