Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“encourage”应为“encourages”，“confidence confident”重复且错误。建议注意动词单复数一致和形容词、副词的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

例: Yes, my favorite teacher is my high school English teacher. She is not only a professional educator but also a strong and independent woman who always encourages her students to be confident and believe in themselves.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“One of the reason”应为“One of the reasons”，以及表达不够简洁。建议注意名词复数形式和句子简洁性，避免冗长和重复。

例: To be honest, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher. One reason is that I was very young then, so I didn't have a chance to exchange contact information. Moreover, over time, we lost contact.

提案: 回答中存在词汇和语法错误，如“struck academically”应为“struggled academically”，“motivate”应为“motivation”，时态不一致。建议注意词汇准确性和时态一致性，同时丰富细节表达。

例: My favorite teacher was my high school English teacher who played a crucial role in boosting my confidence. Although I struggled academically at that time, she always encouraged me to be confident and express myself honestly. Thanks to her motivation and support, I gradually improved my skills.

提案: 回答中表达不完整且语法混乱，如“makes me feel extremely”后缺少形容词。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯，使用恰当的词汇表达感受。

例: Yes, I do. I obtained a high school qualification while I was at university, and I believe being a teacher can give me a real sense of achievement. Helping students understand difficult concepts and seeing their progress makes me feel extremely fulfilled.

× She is not only a professional educator, but also she's a strong and independent woman who always encourage her students to be confidence confident and believe themselves.

✓ She is not only a professional educator, but also she's a strong and independent woman who always encourages her students to be confident and believe in themselves.

动词 'encourage' 应该与主语 'she' 保持单数形式，故应为 'encourages'。'confidence' 是名词，句中应使用形容词 'confident' 来修饰学生。'believe themselves' 应改为 'believe in themselves'，因为 'believe' 需要介词 'in' 来引出宾语。

× One of the reason is that I was very young at that time, so I haven't had a chance to exchange the contact like phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

✓ One of the reasons is that I was very young at that time, so I haven't had a chance to exchange contact information like phone numbers or WeChat IDs with them.

'One of the reason' 中 'reason' 应为复数形式 'reasons'，因为 'one of' 后面接复数名词。'exchange the contact' 表达不准确，应为 'exchange contact information'。

× Besides, as the time passed, I have lost contact.

✓ Besides, as time passed, I lost contact.

句中描述过去发生的动作，应使用一般过去时 'lost'，而非现在完成时 'have lost'。此外，'as the time passed' 中 'the' 可省略，表达更自然。

× So thanks to her motivate and support, I gradually improve my skill.

✓ So thanks to her motivation and support, I gradually improved my skills.

'motivate' 是动词，句中应使用名词形式 'motivation'。'improve' 应用过去时 'improved'，与上下文时态一致。'skill' 应为复数 'skills'，表示多项技能。

× Yes I do, and to be honest I've got a high school qualification when I was in university and I think to be a teacher can give me a real sense of achievement if helping students understand difficult concepts and seeing them progress makes me feel extremely.

✓ Yes, I do, and to be honest I got a high school qualification when I was in university, and I think being a teacher can give me a real sense of achievement because helping students understand difficult concepts and seeing them progress makes me feel extremely happy.

'I've got' 应改为一般过去时 'I got'，因为动作发生在过去。'to be a teacher' 应改为动名词短语 'being a teacher'。句子末尾缺少形容词，'feel extremely' 不完整，应补充 'happy'。