Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在人称混淆（she和he），且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意人称一致性，简洁表达，并避免重复。

例: Yes, my favourite teacher was my English teacher in secondary school. She was very patient and helped me improve my English skills. I really appreciated her kindness and support.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态和句式，明确表达是否保持联系。

例: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved to other cities and lost their contact information.

提案: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意单复数和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: My favourite teacher helped me by giving extra exercises to practice. Moreover, she taught me exam techniques, such as using different strategies to answer different types of questions.

提案: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和语法正确。

例: Yes, I want to be a kindergarten teacher in the future because I love children. Currently, I work in a kindergarten playgroup, which makes me more confident about this career choice.

× She calls me Zhen **. *** is very patient to teach me English skills and knowledge.

✓ She calls me Zhen **. She is very patient in teaching me English skills and knowledge.

这里的错误是第三人称单数动词使用不当。原句中“*** is very patient to teach me”结构不正确，应该用“She is very patient in teaching me”来表达耐心地教。

× Moreover, he was very nice.

✓ Moreover, she was very nice.

前文提到的老师是女性，使用代词时应保持一致，不能用“he”指代女性老师，应改为“she”。

× No I did not. Still in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved to the other cities so I don't have their contacts.

✓ No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved to other cities, so I don't have their contacts.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整句子，使用正确时态和连词，使句子通顺。

× My favorite teacher gave me various extra exercise for me to study.

✓ My favorite teacher gave me various extra exercises to study.

“exercise”应使用复数形式“exercises”，因为“various”表示多种多样，需搭配复数名词。

× she taught me a lot of exam skills such as different questions use different skills to answer.

✓ She taught me a lot of exam skills, such as using different skills to answer different questions.

原句中代词和句子结构混乱，应调整为“using different skills to answer different questions”以表达清晰。

× Moreover, I'm now I am work in a kindergarten play group, so I would like to be a teacher in the future.

✓ Moreover, I am now working in a kindergarten playgroup, so I would like to be a teacher in the future.

“I'm now I am work”结构错误，应使用现在进行时“I am now working”表示正在进行的动作。