Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“some things in my school life”表达不够准确。可以增加具体细节，说明老师如何帮助你，使回答更丰富。

例: My favorite teacher is my university tutor. She has helped me greatly, not only with my studies but also by offering advice on managing school life, such as balancing coursework and extracurricular activities.

提案: 表达不够自然，存在语法和用词错误，如“pay attention to the moment in WeChat each other”和“sing best wishes”不合适。建议使用更地道的表达，并且简洁明了。

例: We still keep in touch, but not very often. Sometimes I see her posts on WeChat, and I always send her my best wishes during the New Year.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，如“pays much attention to on my grades”和“For some.”。建议使用完整句子，明确具体帮助内容，并使用连接词使回答连贯。

例: She pays close attention to my grades each term and provides guidance on difficult courses. In addition, she supports me with advice on managing my school life, such as time management and stress relief.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误，如“don't have many confidence on teaching a student”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且可以适当扩展理由，使回答更完整。

例: To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher because my major is financial management. I plan to work in finance in the future, and I don't feel confident about teaching students.

× She helped me a lot not only in my learning but also some things in my school life.

✓ She helped me a lot not only in my learning but also with some things in my school life.

介词使用错误，短语 'not only ... but also ...' 中，'but also' 后面应接介词短语，需加介词 'with'。

× We keep connecting, but not frequently.

✓ We keep in touch, but not frequently.

动词短语错误，表达保持联系应使用 'keep in touch'，而非 'keep connecting'。

× Sometimes we pay attention to the moment in WeChat each other and I always sing best wishes to her in New Year days.

✓ Sometimes we pay attention to each other's moments on WeChat, and I always send best wishes to her on New Year's Day.

介词和表达错误，'pay attention to the moment in WeChat each other' 结构混乱，应改为 'pay attention to each other's moments on WeChat'；'sing best wishes' 应为 'send best wishes'；'in New Year days' 应为 'on New Year's Day'。

× She pays much attention to on my grades every term and gives me guidance on some courses.

✓ She pays much attention to my grades every term and gives me guidance on some courses.

介词重复错误，'attention to on' 中 'on' 多余，应删除。

× In addition, she helps me in my school life. For some.

✓ In addition, she helps me in my school life in some ways.

句子结构不完整，'For some.' 片段不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I don't have many confidence on teaching a student.

✓ I don't have much confidence in teaching a student.

不可数名词 'confidence' 应用 'much' 修饰，且介词应为 'in' 而非 'on'。