Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“made the play games to focus on”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, my favourite teacher is Mr. Lee, who taught me English in second grade. He was very funny and often used games to help us concentrate during lessons.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“still in touch”应为“still in touch with”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers. For example, I send a message to my technology teacher, Mr. Huang, every Chinese New Year.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，且有语法错误，如“improve my English teacher knowledge”不合适。建议明确表达老师如何帮助自己，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: My favourite teacher, Mr. Lee, used his sense of humor to make lessons interesting, which helped me improve my English skills. I really respect him for that.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题，如“prefer her to be”应为“I prefer to be”。建议使用正确的语法结构，并表达清楚自己的职业选择理由。

例: Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher because I think the salary is usually low. I would prefer to be a sales assistant since it offers higher pay.

× He is a funny person and usually made the play games to focus on.

✓ He is a funny person and usually makes the play games to focus on.

句子中描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时态，'made'是过去式，需改为第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× Yeah, I still in touch with my primary school teacher, for instance, my technology teacher, Mr. Huang, I would send message once a year during Chinese New Year.

✓ Yeah, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher, for instance, my technology teacher, Mr. Huang. I send messages once a year during Chinese New Year.

缺少动词be动词'am'，导致句子结构不完整；'would send'表达习惯动作时不合适，应使用一般现在时'send'。

× I still in touch with my primary school teacher

✓ I am still in touch with my primary school teacher

短语中缺少be动词'am'，'in touch with'是固定搭配，需完整表达。

× Honestly I prefer her to be a sales assistant because it offer higher salaries.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to be a sales assistant because it offers higher salaries.

'her'用错，应该用不定式表达自己的意愿；'it offer'主谓不一致，'offer'应改为第三人称单数形式'offers'。

× Honestly I prefer her to be a sales assistant because it offer higher salaries.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to be a sales assistant because it offers higher salaries.

主语'it'是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为'offers'。